This is a very ooc fic...

Wow, a lot happened in this chapter. I'm excited to read more!

Despite my bitching about Harry's betrayal of Hermione, I liked how this story ended even though we didn't get to see Hermione flaying Harry for his disrespect. Which we needed to see. Needed.

Good for Hermione for not letting Draco get away with the caveman routine.

I know we're supposed to be cheering for Draco and all, but how does Harry know that Draco has any sort of good intentions toward Hermione? Doesn't he trust her to know her own mind and therefore have enough sense left in his arrogant little brain to trust her judgment about him?

The amount of hell I want to see Hermione give Harry is doubling by the second, but of course she won't do anything to Harry because he's the li'l golden boy and he's her bestest friend ever even when he stabs her in the back, completely disregards her wishes, treats her like a 5 year old, and arrogantly never considers that maybe just maybe he doesn't know shit.

I could see involving Blaise who Hermione wouldn't mind so much if at all, but Draco? That's purposefully slapping Hermione in the face. If this is Harry's idea of friendship Hermione sure doesn't need enemies.

What if Draco was emotionally, mentally, or sexually abusive to Hermione? How would Harry feel about so arrogantly manipulating the situation? What if Draco was one of those assholes who try to convince retarded females that DBSM isn't just another form of abuse, hurt Hermione when he conned her into falling for it, and she was doing great to get away from him and now here's Harry throwing the asshole right back in her space? Hermione had a great reason to avoid Draco but Harry is too full of himself to bother reading the situation accurately. He'd rather blunder his way around and could easily be risking throwing Hermione back into an abusive relationship and he couldn't care less.

Also, in what world is it ok for Hermione to prostitute herself out for her job? Harry isn't a veyr good friend in that respect, either, or things would be different.

So now that Harry has managed to suck Draco into his smarmy plans Ron is suddenly free for the assignment? And let me guess...no one thinks to tell Draco his questionable and highly unwanted services are no longer needed now, right? Of course not. The place is packed with "protectors" so naturally Draco is going to hang around and be disgustingly sleazy.

Huh, for the purposes of this story I'd thought that Harry was supposed to like Hermione. I also thought Ron was off on assignment and therefore couldn't help watch the situation. If he's there, why is Harry involving The Ash-Haired Twit?

*clicks next while humming "Harry is a dead man when Hermione finds out" and hoping Hermione gets Draco back but good for whatever he did to her previously"

Very well done. Thank you!

Wow. That's hot and sweet. We ride!

Good for them

Thank god!

Oh hell Harry! Too late.

Stupid man. Love the chemistry between Draco and hermionie