I liked the added details about his kindergarten report card

the sexual tension though

this fic is just brilliantly written

Rapid City, SD? Hells yas

Not a huge Jess fan, but this is a great story. Hot.

Yum. Gracias.
I swear if Jess and Rory don't end up together at the end of this revival I will scream. Then again, if they do I probably will scream then, too.

Are you excited about the news of this revival?

I need a cold shower...

I'm sorry, I melted into a pile of goo, I might need a minute.
I love these too, and you write them well. Steeaaammmmyyyy.

This is like the perfect future plot. What would have been funny is if Luke and Lor Knew they'd run into each other. Like they set it up because they were worried about them both and decide they would be best with each other. lol

This is my favorite Rory/Jess fanfic. You really capture both characters so well and it seems a very plausible way for both to end up together. The bedroom scenes are hot! Well done.

I really loved this story

I hate that your mostly a Trroy kind of writer really such a shame...lol just kidding but this was actually my most favorite oneshot. I was trying to get an idea how a oneshot was suppose to end only to be wanting more what a shame an awesome story that left me wanting more of your writing...was never content with Tristan and would not check him out good thing you have some LIT Fics or I would have been sad to know lol. Overall nine out of ten love every aspect though you could have gone slower when they actually tore each other mouths off and left some for our imagination by making the story longer with cliff hangers but love how it begun and ended

Wow! That was beautiful! I'm so glad I found it. There was something very honest and sweet about it, yet it wasn't too mushy. I liked how they didn't solve everything but yet you managed to give the story a happy, hopeful ending.

And it was very hot too! Very well-written, and very satisfying (although I did wish the sex scene had been elaborated a bit more, I just didn't want it to end yet). I found it was quite easy to picture the scene, since you wrote it so well. Now I'm fantasizing about all the future encounters that they could have!

I just adored this. It was so damn addicting. I wanted more but you ended it in a good spot. I am just a sucker for a really decent post series lit story. I have found a few okay ones just not one i am in love with yet

This story was beautifully written. I loved the plot because it was believable, but didn't get all cheesy with the apologies and mushiness which is so not something that was a part of their relationship. Another well-written story of yours :)