Reviews for Lately
LanceSennin chapter 1 . 1/3/2018
Use of Words: 9/10
Plot: 8.50/10
Story Flow: 7.50/10

Overall: 8.25/10

Okay, I'm certainly not pleased with how you made Lucy's first time with Loke... I could've taken it better if it was Gray, because I can understand Natsu's pain that time... However, I did calm down when I saw Lisanna was Natsu's first... Well, now they're even...
UNICRN LVR26 chapter 1 . 2/6/2017
awww
Guest chapter 1 . 1/1/2016
"Of course I win. I always win because I'm always right."

I remembered Akashi Seijuuro from kuroko no basket ️
MadamScorpio chapter 1 . 5/12/2015
too cute lol
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FutureMageOtaku99 chapter 1 . 3/4/2015
So good!
LovelyFairytail chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
Kawaii!
lucy-drxgneel chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
ok I know you have good intentions but personally i think you spoiled the story effect for me when you put Lisana as his firs love,first kiss and his first time and you also lost my love for this story when Loki kissed Lucy it was annoying and spoiled the story for me and then you added Lisana and I just got pissed.
Eliza Sunny chapter 1 . 6/5/2013
Awwwww that was so cuuuuuuute )))) thank u for a sweet scene ))
ChibiEnjeru chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
First time?!
None chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
WHY DID LOKE KISS LUCY THE FUCK!
AND LISANNA WAS'NT HIS FIRST LOVE THEY WERE LIKE FAST FRIENDS! NOT LOVERS AHEM OVERALL I LIKE THE STORY.
Allienne chapter 1 . 6/22/2012
Ah poor Loke...he loves Lucy so much yet she is made for Natsu...and only Natsu...even if Bixlow thinks otherwise...hehehe
MMHMM chapter 1 . 5/6/2012
lisanna WAS NOT natsu's first love or KISS...OTHER THAN THAT i liked the story
YeetMaster5000 chapter 1 . 3/25/2012
LOOOVE!
Erisa Daelyn chapter 1 . 1/13/2012
I love this, it's very cute :)
Unrequited Love 143 chapter 1 . 12/6/2011
LOOL awww how cute :3

Natsu and Lucy forever XD although... Lucy and Loki wouldn't be bad either :3 ahah
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