Reviews for Juniper Berries
adbhut chapter 10 . 10/7/2015
This one was emotional as well as strengthening. Reminds me so much of the first season when they were having a party(was it a party?) after the Black-Dranzer fiasco at lake Baikal. They all acknowledged themselves as a team for the first time.
adbhut chapter 9 . 10/7/2015
It was so... awesomely bizarre, or bizarrely awesome. Tala sleeping on the roof was hilarious. And Julia's bed?! what was he thinking?! Loved the drabble! Tala explaining the reason for Kai not sleeping in his own bed was so blunt, I found it really cute.
adbhut chapter 8 . 10/4/2015
Lol!Poor Kai is the one always targeted by the reporters. I bet they love to pester him... those idiots. And just imagine the rest of the team trying to hold back their laughter when they know the reporter is pushing the wrong buttons as Kai glares at the camera and leaves.
I like the questions Kai wants to be asked. They make so much sense!
The part where he tells us how he treated Dranzer despite of her being the most loved by him was so sorrowful. This was so unfair. W know he is not responsible (okay, maybe a bit) but he takes more than the fair share of blame on himself. And my heart just breaks when he wishes that no one should grow up like him. It was so.. sad. Sad and kinda noble.
adbhut chapter 7 . 10/3/2015
Kai and Dranzer's conversation was mesmerizing. Especially the part where Dranzer tells him he is a phoenix and not a dodo. I used to think of her like a guardian to Kai but I like her more this way. Kai being annoyed about the day and the explanation he gives was really interesting. I would love to read a sequel to this.
adbhut chapter 6 . 10/1/2015
Wow, I loved the way you wrote Zeo's mind. The way he thought that everything he thought was actually programmed was genius!... and sad. The confusion and frustration in his mind felt so real but frightening.
I like how Tala is so comfortable with himself. No self-pity,anger or disgust. He even makes it sound cool to be Cyborg when he says "I am too."
This really was a great piece and the idea was so original(atleast I haven't read anything like this before). It is now one of my favourites too!
adbhut chapter 5 . 9/29/2015
loved it!From the fourth chapter, I liked the tip-of-the-iceberg you used the words "Boris 'takes' from him" it gave me shivers. Nicely written. Also, the part about him giving his life for Kai was cute.
This chapter, it was sad. Like Wolborg being the only one who knows Tala has a soul, sounds like others regarded him as a soulless person. Terrible.
But the part where wolborg says he succeeds occasionally in arming Tala's soul, sounded hopeful.
adbhut chapter 3 . 9/26/2015
This is a masterpiece because you used Brooklyn,Mystel and math: really, mathematics in one story without any fatalities. Their freindship was so cute! Especially Mystel calling him Brooke. And I loved it when you used 'oh' twice , second time in italics to make your point.
adbhut chapter 2 . 9/26/2015
Not logged in. Wow, Tyson has a big heart. The last line was so beautiful! Tyson always beleives that the person in front of him is good and caring and loving even when they don't show it. But at the same time it is sad because of Kai. Nicely written!
adbhut chapter 1 . 9/26/2015
Sorry, not logged in. This piece was really good! I would love to see Daichi as a mummy. The last part about ghosts and bogeymen in Kai's head gave me goosebumps. Poor Kai, he has endured a lot in the past.
CorynOfHoole chapter 9 . 4/7/2013
Cool that you're still updating with the newest chapter :)
But out of all of them, this is probably my favorite. It's just so randomly awesome.
Who knows all the quirks Kai may have that we don't see because he doesn't get nearly enough screen-time... TT
gizmo5225 chapter 11 . 4/5/2013
Brilliant. You really know how to get inside characters' heads, and this was no different; you wouldn't think anything if things like that. Brilliant work!
crazingonbeyblade111 chapter 10 . 8/18/2012
Chapter 9 - I love your writing style here. It is crisp and straight to the point - I really liked the variation of sentence length as the chapter continued, as this seemed to highlight the key events of the chapter. And on a less serious note...awwwwww Kai sleeping in Tala's bed...cuuuute! I must admit, Tala not being able to sleep in a warm room reminds me of..me XD
Loved it, and the ending made me giggle :)

Chapter 10 - This chapter made me think; there is a stark contrast between the writing styles in these two chapters, which is something I admire in an author :) and I think 'Team' was written brilliantly.

Well done, and keep writing :) :)
gizmo5225 chapter 10 . 8/17/2012
A real show of just how close the blade breakers are. Short but I loved it, amazing job and in excited for the next little Drabble!
Z-Aquarius-Kai chapter 9 . 8/14/2012
AHAHAHAHA! WTF? This was so random and so funny. so glad you updated!
Update soon. You should have a Johnny chapter too ;)
-ZAK
gizmo5225 chapter 9 . 8/12/2012
That was just hilarious. First Tala's bed 'cause he can't sleep in it because of temperature; then faichi's because the monkey can't understand four is a time when everyone will scream at him fr waking them up; then sleeping at the girls' feet, causing slight panic; and finally he tried Julia's. I can understand why they called Tala, especially if he and Julia were dating. Oh, I would laugh then... But this was hilarious, and explained why they never saw Kai skewing until he opened up somewhat. Amazing Drabble, an I'll watch for another! Great job!
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