That was great! It was as cheesy and hilarious as I had hoped, and I'm glad that you managed to finish it even if it wasn't exactly how you had hoped.

Man I love Denny and Lanna XD

Also, I thought that Lillian was a good fit for Chelsea and Vaughn's daughter, too!

This is a great fic and your any awesome writer that needs SMILES :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

wow!you can't tell but im giving you a thumbs up right now!

this is one of the best fanfictions ive read so far!when will you update ? im waiting!hehe!

I've admittedly never read this story but frankly speaking; I enjoyed this chapter so much :") I'll just read the rest of the story right away. Denny's bathing suit idea should really be taken into consideration.
"Seriously. Man, you missed out on a lot of fun weddings."
Whatever he meant by that, I don't know. But that line was hilarious. God alone knows what type of weddings he's been to. I loved this chapter, I'm eager to know more I must say :")

How disgustingly cute. So much so that it deserves a blushie face(yes I just typed that).
-' '- congratulations...on almost being done with your first fanfic!

Warning! Warning! SOPA's back. SOPA's back. Warn others! PLEASE for the future of Fanfiction.

I like it. Sweet and simple. It is actually really hard to write something short. Good luck with the ending!

EKKKKKKK!
Update soon! I just love this soooooo much :3

Aw cute. I found it a bit weird to propose to Vaughn in the game. I'm not oldfashioned but it is much cuter when a man proposes to a woman :)

I'm glad you updated again! I can't wait for the next chapter! (:

There was a lot of talking, which isn't bad but...there was a lot of talking- anyways cheers for cuteness and Mark being gone! Are you planning on making more chapters? It seems like you might have a few questions to answer still...

Oh, and all of your vocabulary made me happy -' '- I feel smart for not having to go to .

Wow this story is so cool. I couldn't stop reading.
No sorry that was a lie. :P
I had to eat something and do some talk with a friend.
Love is in the air!
When I first played this game I married Vaughn as well. He is so cute when he is blushing. :D
Accidentaly a friend deleted the save. How do you call that?
English isn't my motherlanguage :(
Expectingly waiting for the next chapter.
yours sincerly C.c.a.

I love Sabrina...but I still laughed when she jumped into the water. Imagining the small girl all dressed in pink jumping into the ocean screaming and crying...hilarious. People are so funny to me.
I know, I'm a horrible, horrible person.

Dang...Am I loving this story or what? I love the plot line and all the betrayal...*evil laugh* I cannot wait for the next chapter, keep up the amazing work! :3

Hah! I knew it, I knew it had to be the mob! But seriously, what the heck was Mark's dad doing that he needed 1 million gold to pay off his debt? what a sleazebag...
Oh well, thanks for the mostly adorable chapter!