SO SO SO GOOD! PLEASE KEEP WRITING YOURE AWESOME

Great story, hope u come back soon

Oh my goodness holy cliffhanger batman! Is Arren Kae already dark and influencing him? Has he Fallen properly yet or will Malachor take him with it? Will he have glow in the dark eyes next time he takes off his mask in front of Bastila?

I miss Alek and the prank war so much but it was a great build up to piling on the heartache. Please please please.

I hope you'll accept an anonymous review from a fan; this is fantastic. The tension, character voices, plot, all utterly wonderful. I really (selfishly) hope there is more to come, because this is just the best.

My love for this story knows no bounds.

Don’t make this a sad end, no one likes those stories

This story is awesome. Enough said.

Really well done AU. Please finish!

I gotta say, this story took a turn somewhere along that I did not expect it to, and I love it. Great work

Found your story a little later than most of the other reviewers here, looks like, but I really love your style and where you've led the plot so far! I also appreciate that you've actually made a massive, expansive world beyond just Bastila and Revan; I'm pissed at Fett, I pity that decoy Revan a/ Mandalore, and I feel for Canderous, suddenly totally alone because of the Pretender's backroom backstabbing-All this where I'd expected a simple, two-character focused romance. Can't help but be anxious due to this new schism between Revan and everyone he loves, Bastila especially.

What's going to happen at Malachor? What's going to happen after Malachor? Excited to see where you go with this!

i remember reading this years ago when i was first playing through kotor, are you updating and gonna finish this? i really hope so

I find myself in a love-hate relationship with this story. Your prose is fantastic. The characters are excellent. But I keep waiting for a break of day in the darkness of this story, or for Revan to finally take more steps forward than he takes back, or for him to finally shed his ego and share his burden with someone (especially Bastila), and things just keep getting bleaker, certainly culminating here with Revan and Bastila fighting each other. All this is to say, I will be reading this to the very end, and I hope soon there is positive progress in Revan's mental health (that man could really benefit from some therapy).
Thanks for writing.

It seems events are still progressing to the canon-typical ending, but I really enjoyed seeing Bastila's actions trying to circumvent that! Even if she doesn't seem to have been successful.

I'm glad Bastila stood up to Revan even if it didn't work. And poor Arren Kae; rejected by both Revan and the Jedi.

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.