"She was, after all, the smartest witch to come out of Hogwarts since Albus Dumbledore..."

Dumbledore was a witch?

Just pointing out a mistake... nice fic.

this was a great fluffy, yet dramatic fic, a job truly well done!

i loved it, cried over it (I know it's not terribly sad but I'm just soft hearted that way and the relationship between Ron and Hermione is so much like my own with my ex-boyfriend/still my great friend, so I'm guessing from the vividry of the fic that you have experience in that department and was able to translate it well into Ron and Hermione's relationship.)

Thank you for writing this, please continue to and I'll be looking forward to all your other fics, this has been one of the few RHR fics I actually enjoy. So wow for you

This is the cutest story

That was amazing! :D

HONESTLY! Hehehe!

i loved it. it was perfect.

Ugh I just found your story and by the way I'm loving it, but I guess it's too late to guess the movie line, but as soon as I saw it I was all "haha look she quoted Anne of Green Gables " so there you have it. Great taste in movies by the by.

No! Not the baby! Anything but the baby! Next time, you had better let him (or her) live! No!

O... Bet I know what's coming next! Cravings, Christenings, hospitals... Anyone else thinking what I'm thinking?

Favorite quote from fourteen and up was from chapter seventeen:

Ron sat back from his desk with a grimace that would frighten small children.

It characterizes Ron perfectly. Even though this was written before OotP was released (or even talked about, from what I can tell), you have a wonderful foreboding of what was going to happen in it. Apart from the one mention that Sirius was still alive and came out of hiding, I would have guessed this was written after OotP (and now we not-so-patiently await the release of HBP this July).

I liked the Quidditch team/Weasley family part - that really captured my attention since I used to think that the Weasleys could have an entire Quidditch team if they wanted. I hope you've gotten many places with your writing, and I wish you luck if you ever happen to come back to and continue writing or just to check up on your stories - after all, you're still getting steady reviews three years later!

The plot kept me going, and I was a bit pissed off when I had to sign off the computer in the middle of a chapter. Not very huge cliffhanger pangs since the story was finished and I could go back later and be able to read it right away, but a cliffhanger's a cliffhanger. I'm never able to keep a plot going, not even in one shots.

Again, I envy you for your perfect characterizations, and I was a bit sad when the story came to an end - I wish you'd write more! Again, good luck with your writing ambitions, and I would be honored to say I read your writing before you were famous. :)

Michelle {Rianna Potter}

I was going to wait until I finished reading the whole story to review (with a big humongous one), but I couldn't wait any longer.

["And then, imagine bringing a child into that. Or, knowing Ron, several children." Hermione blushed, remembering the previous night.]

Heh heh. Funny stuff. :D

[After an infinitesimal pause, she relaxed in the casual embrace, and Ron released a breath he didn't realize he'd been holding.]

I like that line, but I don't know why... hmm.

I knew it! I knew the pregnancy was coming! And thank you for writing totally in character - it's hard to find completely IC fics these days. And now I'm onto chapter fourteen, and I'll leave a nice big lovely review at the end of twenty too. :D

It's been quite a while since I've read a multi-chaptered fic, but I couldn't stop with this one! I have to applaud you on keeping Ron and Hermione in character (I am very picky about this LOL) and by keeping the plot going with each chapter.

And kudos for the Green Gables and Jane Austen references. I was actually watching Pride and Prejudice while reading this (Mr. Darcy! Yay!). :D

I would just like to say that this is possibly the best Ron/Hermione fic I have ever read. You got the emotions down perfectly. It was a joy to read.

not all of chapter 11 is coming up...could you email me that chapter to fredngeorgegirl

thanks

Aw that was so cute ~sighs~ ... I'm so glad they got married in the end! :D I absolutely enjoyed every single bit of this!

~ Lauren x

I really like the swore like a sailor analogy. It's just so fitting for that moment. I had to chuckle to myself. Normally I'd like to think I don't do such unfemine-like things...