This story was absolutely wonderful! No one felt OOC, the pacing was great, and everything Nezumi is thinking about at the end is apt spot on.

Wow awesome story.

Can I 0_0 surrender to?

A great name and I really love how you handle Nezumi and Shion. I like it more when they keep the character! I'm not a fan of OOC.
Thanks a lot. Love it!

WTFFFF shion seme?...nezumi uke? You havent seen the anime/manga or something? Jeeesus -.-

...And from that scene on, it gets worst. -wails-

At any rate, I love that Shion wasn't molded into the ideal uke in this story. A change, and a great one of that. Nezumi was no less himself, even when bottoming, and I am even more glad for that.

Well done! :D

nice good story

love it! so hot! though i've always pictured shion as the uke...he's too ukeish to be seme...switchers perhaps?

This is a beautifully written sexual experience and the way you took us inside their heads while it all was happening made it even richer. This is not just PWP. I've had this in my favorites for a while now and decided to read it again and it's just as lovely as I remembered it :)

this is so lovely.

Oh my God, that ending actually explained to me why Rat left him? This is, woah, super emotional. I literally finished the anime (started the manga too) yesterday... Too many tears. Too much. I wanted fluff, instead I got a SUPER EMOTIONAL and WELL WRITTEN sadstuck. I'm alternating between "thank you" and "how could you" for writing this.

How thank could you.

Hi hi, Nezumi surrender XD

Oooohhh, I like where this is going! :3

Cute33333334

This story was absolutely wonderful! I loved the interactions between the two and seeing into their thoughts :D I'm going to go read some more of your stuff, because you have quite the plethora of No. 6 stories.