| Reviews for Unwritten Loyalties |
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DammitimmaD chapter 1 . 11/6/2011 Ah! So CUTE! :D I really love Caremy! |
Anigen chapter 1 . 11/5/2011 I like it. mostly because i was over Care sticking up for Bonnie but i like your Caremy, its sweet and nice. wish it was a little longer though ] |
Dherea chapter 1 . 10/31/2011 Really good job! I like how Caro is there for him - not necessarily as a love interest-but as a friend. Jeremy is right - Anna died - they did not break-up. Bonnie should realize that as opposed to acting childishly. |
EtherealDemon chapter 1 . 10/30/2011 LoL... you're just too cute with you're declaraiton of inability to take critisim. I'm also a devoted Caremy shipper and I really like this innocent moment between them. I just think it's too bad so very few read Caremy fics... I'm sure if they did you'd be getting lots of praise for this one shot. Great job! |
SormustenHerra chapter 1 . 10/29/2011 Hi! I think the idea of this fic was kind of interesting, though I do think that it could've been done somewhat better. I would have liked more details and personality, though I think that Caroline biting her lip is so her! But, maybe this could have been little longer, little more deeper with meaning. I did get the idea of what Jeremy was feeling...but maybe there could have been little bit more of it. :) But I think it's not bad but it's not fabulous either. Kind of just a fic to read and feel good afterwards :D BTW, I really hope that BonnieXJeremy is not ower, or that it at least would hvae little more drama coming...and I do think that Car and Ty are perfect for eacother, so no reason to break them up ;D |