Great work!

that's pretty much the way i feel about the way SoujixChie is criminously overshadowed by SoujixYukiko and SoujixNaoto! Thanks!

you should continue this fic. i rather like Yu/chie pairings. any way good luck for you.

souji/chie 3

next chapter please.

:))

Impressive.

It's been a while since I've read a good jealousy-based story, but this one has some real weight to it. I always was curious to see how this dynamic would play among the team, or if it would at all. When put in this light, I can see it very easily.

Well done

Oooh.

There are a few punctuation errors but that's about it. I like how she's so insecure-I can really feel the including her shadow with her feelings toward Yukiko and the subtle actions and fears she has, like pressing her arm on Yukiko's shoulder. You did an excellent job conveying that distant feeling she had from Yu. The ending was a little rushed-but whatever. It's a one shot.