I friggen' love your story! I love everything, the way you wrote it seemed so... real... like this was an actual story. I also love how you made the story sad, but with a happy ending... I always love happy endings! I hope I can become a writer like you someday

This was good! Great writing!

This was amazing :) it really invoked a good bit of emotion. I really loved it 0 great job

Okay, this was SO cute. I loved it very, very much! Excellent work; Vaughn is so awesome. I'm a little confused as to what he did, but I'm just that way :P I have a feeling he cheated or just left. But I loved it, loved it, loved it! :D Great job!