Reviews for Lord of Shadows |
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C.M.Alm chapter 4 . 4/2/2015 continue this please! |
Guest chapter 4 . 4/6/2014 Looking forward to the next chapter but please save Harry and hermione at the end |
Kenjo chapter 4 . 1/20/2013 Ooohhh... Love it!:) update soon please!:) |
Falcon's Jade chapter 4 . 5/9/2012 I agree that you need a beta, there are many misspelled words here and since this is so far only four chapters plus with an intriguing plot I would be happy to offer my services. If real life and writers block is causing trouble I'll be happy to discuss some ideas as well, for it's rare to find these HPLOTR crossovers with multiple characters involved, no bashing, and with said characters spread out over middle earth. If by now you've already found a beta or lost interest in this story, I just wish to leave a review telling you that this story is very original and I look forward to whenever you return with the next chapter ! |
Master Procrastinator chapter 4 . 4/23/2012 The idea is truly awesome but it's in dire need of editing. I cringed every time I read the word 'Stuart'. |
Asgard Vanguard chapter 4 . 4/14/2012 Great story so far, never thought of Harry and Hermione as nazgul. Only thing i see wrong would be that you keep calling Denethor the Stuart of Gondor. Stuart is a persons name, Steward is the correct title. |
Kaylen Cooper chapter 4 . 3/22/2012 I find this interesting. :) I look forward to reading more. |
cocoa85715 chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 Hmm...I could help with the betaing thing. I'm good at things like proofreading. |
jjones987 chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 Amazing |
Ice Vixen X chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 Oh my, this is sooo different and I LOVE it. I can't wait to see where each path leads them and with the end of that last chapter, it seems paths will be crossing soon. Keep up the great work..._~ |
ChaosTheVoid chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 I find this an interesting read, i hope you can keep up with updates. Though, I must point out there are some minor spelling issues. Looking forward to the next chapter. |
karthik9 chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 it is excellent chapter i look forward to future updates |
LordLoverDuck chapter 4 . 2/3/2012 nice chapter will we have a timeskip to the fellowship next chapter? i look forward to the next update |
EVA-Saiyajin chapter 4 . 2/2/2012 good chapter, keep up the good work! |
Chocolatpen chapter 3 . 12/11/2011 Interesting storyline! Your spelling could be improved but other than that there are no big mistakes! :) please update soon! |