Reviews for Please Help
deanna4403 chapter 17 . 4/24
up date sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon
Kitty chapter 17 . 11/30/2019
Good story. Shame its abandoned. Over 5 years since an update. Wish i knew that before i started reading. Maybe mark it as ababdoned so we dont waste our time.
elanga.blake chapter 17 . 6/27/2019
How do we figure out if the story was adopted?
Guest chapter 17 . 6/4/2019
This story has simply blown my mind. I am waiting to see how they react and was literally going out of my mind when I realised this story was not continuing. I hope you finish it soon but if you don’t I understand. Thank you for your hard work
kaylee.dowell96 chapter 17 . 5/27/2019
I think you have a great story going, I am however just dying to know what will be happening next. so, please hurry. Thank you!
Kiara Bella Cullen chapter 17 . 10/24/2018
This was great. Has anyone adopted this yet? If not then I would like to but I have some stories to finish before I go on with this one.
SilverRosehp chapter 17 . 6/29/2018
Please update your story soon I absolutely love it and hope you continue it soon.
karanterus chapter 17 . 6/5/2018
Tip for the next chapter: harry's magic forces the memory charm to brake and he has a flash back of lock-hart raping him.

Tip for the weasley part: Ginny used/uses a lust potion on harry to try and become pregnant to get the potter money, Ginny used/uses a love potion to get harry to marry her to get the money?.

pairing for gibbs?: minerva mcgonagall? (XD), Tonks? (Cos you want Sirius and Remus to be lovers so she's free), Bill weasley?, Charlie weasley?, Severus snape? (he and gibbs could get close and fall in love?).

Defeat of moldy shorts: Harry finds a spell that kills the soul there for destroying not only Voldemort body but also his soul poises?
Beth5572 chapter 17 . 2/6/2018
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too. Keep up your a great work of art. I would also love to found out who has the story in the end because I would love to see the end of it.

Thank you and Please,

Terri
Taiga Hibari chapter 6 . 8/1/2017
Gibbs headslap should have a TradeMark
Rae chapter 17 . 12/4/2016
update please
Guest chapter 1 . 11/9/2016
...This needs to be Beta'd I suggest looking for a beta asap.
SecretSpells chapter 10 . 9/18/2016
I hope you are able to get the inspiration you need to continue the story.
Unknown chapter 1 . 5/5/2016
Hello i am just started reading and i already find this very intresting, however i would like to point out the strangeness of Harry asking what time it is only to later have a watch (If i read correctly) Mabye it would be better for there to be a clock in the park or a nearby church. All the best for all future writing adventures
-Unknown
God of the Challenge chapter 4 . 4/7/2016
Master gave Harry a sock. Harry is free.
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