-beams-

Holy shit! That was sick and yet so awesome! Very good job!

oh my O.o

seriously twisted. well written, fascinating character sketch of percy. *shiver* wow

me likes!

*mouth drops, gaping* That was... Wow... Gorgeous. Amazing. One of those rare stories that just completely works and is breathtakingly beautiful and sexy and allaround indescribable.

That was... sweet! Well, not the word for such an evil demanted fic such as this... but it's brilliant! I love it. Great job

Intense and immensely disturbing. Absolutely wonderful.

Flawless...

Original pairing, which makes the fic even more interesting to read. You've got me to like this pairing now... Percy and Tom... Never thought about it...

Perfect flow of storyline. Written to a nice detail. I know I say this a lot, but very original, very.

WOW. My question is: how can you know the exact things I feel and put them into words when you've never met me and even I can't put them into words myself? ...I guess artistic expression transcends time and space. This was chillingly real to me. Utterly brilliant. I've read this a million times and I cried every time. Just incredible work. Going on my favorites list for sure.

Nice..I really like the pairing and the way you worked it out. Not fluffy at all, that's what makes it so good.

I love this story I'v read it before several times and each time it strikes me near blind with it's darkness. I love how paternizing and biting you made Tom. I also love how you depicted Percy and his self-loathing. Just brillient, I am sure to read it you for such a great Fic.

Jeez...hey I like it...*stares some* Lovely lovely lovely...

You did a very nice job with Tom. . Wish there'd been a scrump scene! lol!

ohh...that was bloody exellent...very dark/twisted plot going on, the fact that he was trying to help his little sister just makes it even more so, the extra touch with the prefect badge was brillant, all in all very dark and, for some strange reason, yummy (me being entirly normal...right...)

Look forward to more like this.

Mojo.

WOW! I like it! I had the exact same idea...wanna go down the and join my Percy/Tom ship?

... disturbing... very disturbing.

I like it! lol. I swear, by the time I'm done going through your fics, Percy's going to be one of my favourite characters.

Interesting pairing too. I don't think I've even heard of it before. And you made it work well too. Very believeable situation that he got himself in to. Great fic. :)

Amy