Good story. I liked your battle scenes in this particular one also. I also admired your character descriptions. It wasn't hard at all to get a good picture of Kaze in my head. Good job overall.

That teleporting thing- that's comedy.
And, this is a Pokemon fic, not a killing man fic. Oh, well, it's getting interesting, so if you'd hurry up and write it, that'll be great.

YES! You updated! And here was I thinking you'd forgotten this fic. I like how this is turning out, and yes, I want my character to stay in the story.

Wow, this hasn't been updated in a long time! I still remember this fic to! I think about it every once in awhile. I'm so glad your getting back to this, and you have all summer! _

*taps foot impatiently* Come on, I wanna see what happens? Have you forgotten us? Have ya? Don't leave us waiting in the dark...

Love it! Keep going! I can't wait for my character!

I just finnished reading your last two chapters, and I really liked them! Sorry that it took me so long to read and review, but I only just got the chance. I really liked how you wrote Torrent! The other charecters are great too! I can't wait to read what happens next! I am REALLY looking forward to the next chapter!

*cries* I thought I reviewed already! Damn you, Xing! *cough* Well, good job. I read this like four times and I still like it. Get out the next chapter soon, or... *grins as the Beating Stick appears behind her Kasumi-style* Keep on writing! *shoots radio and wanders off Ryouga-like*

A fairly good chapter, though I think you are introducing the new characters too quickly, just as I start to learn a little bit about them it's off to another new character; whatever, I guess it's just my preferance to read about only a few core characters, so don't mind me. I am begining to see some deffinate plot movement so that is a good thing, and from what I can tell it looks to be shaping up to be a good story. I look foreward to the next chapter.

I really have nothing better to do, since I'm on the other side of the country and am incapable of working on my own fics, so I read your chapter again. I like it a lot, especially how you're tying it all together. Poor, misunderstood Sasha...good thing she has her Pokemon to look after her! You did a really nice job with her; she's just like I'd want her to be! I have more time to leave a detailed review, so...here goes. I like the settings and how the Pokemon battle incorporated the setting into it. The charcters were very 3-D with personalities that you portrayed well. Overall: *****! 2 thumbs up! Yay!

That was mean...Sasha's not a freak! Anyway, thanks for e-mailing me. I appreciate it. This was, and still is, a very good chapter, and would have been even if Sasha wasn't in it. You are a very good author. (No, I'm not just saying that because you control the lifespan of my character) Well, I have to go, but keep writing!

YAY! I'm in the fic! poor lil' Pichu.. anyway, keep up the good work!

You're right, I HAVE read this. Still good though. Ciao baybeh.

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...Yeah.

-JPBP

dude bitching story i totally loe how everyones is all active in it its not jsut you're average pokemon on pokemon fights they go after the trainers thats cool keep i tup and out my character in the fic lol ok bubi keep it up!

You don't want to take my suggestion, well FINE! - I do this a lot, don't I? Maybe I should e-mail you instead of just leaving reviews...oh well! Chat later!

Dragonet