There are too many rated M Naruto fics here at ff and when I read too much (but never enough), I sometimes got bored at the sex scenes. xD But hey, although I like reading smuts, I'm always on for the story and plot. But this story is different, it made me hot and enjoyed the scenes just be reading.

This story, although short. Have the things that I adore. A well written story and a good plot tho always used but still one of a kind.

Naruto and Sasuke's POV on what happened surprisingly turned out to have a different feels. Naruto's POV will make you giggle and giddy. His antics are cute. A very Naruto-ish style. Sasuke's POV will make you laugh and squeal and fangirl for him. The Ramen manipulation was so very Sasuke. xDD

What I love the most is the pacing, Sasuke courted Naruto first after his initial attraction, he worked hard to earn Naruto's trust first using food before their bedroom adventures which in fact took months. You also made Naruto quite popular too just like Sasuke unlike other stories.

Slow burn romances are always my thing. xD It always make the story a lot more believable and sweet. The built up emotions are always the best. It was quite fun and contradicting explaining it here in this story because it only has 3 chapters, Naruto's POV, Sasuke's POV and the delicious smut. But hey, xDD they still took time before going out right? xD

What made me love this so much? xD The smut. Oh Kami. You wrote it well on my opinion. I still feel hot even after reading it. Wew. I really like how you described it. I feel like puking rainbow all the way reading chapter 3. Goodness gracious indeed. They took time. They enjoyed it.

All in all it was very worth a read. 11/10 would recommend.

Thank you for sharing this masterpiece.

AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! I WISH THERE WAS MORE TO THIS STORY THIS STORY IS FABULOUS

AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT! I WISH THERE WAS MORE TO THIS STORY THOUGH

AMAZING JOB I LOVE IT!

fuck! that was hot! love the sex scene. detailed. and just all out awesome!

It's really really good! Thank you for writing this fic! 3

Awww
Dude, that was super cheesy but I loved it :D3
Plus Sasuke wasn't girly like people like to write him as nowadays .
I loved it :D

I loved it lots .

Woah... This Story sure made my Day.
Congratulations and Thanks.

I loved the story. Made me laugh in places, and it was very well written. Thanks!

Awww so much love ;)

Uh, DUH. Every couple has fluffy moments. End of story.

Here Sasuke. *hands plastic spoon* to gouge their eyes out. Enjoy.

This is going into my favorites.

I see you're not complaining now since you have PLENTY reviews seeing as how this is only three chapters right? *smirks* I want to say something smartass but I think I'm gonna lay off ya for now.

*snickers* I love the way you place the snarky remarks in the chapters. Adds a little something that makes you stand out from other one (or two) shots I've read.

Snare and a trap.

Oh ho ho! Sasuke has caught his fox with the cunning mind of a raven and the speed of a jaguar! *cat's meow in the background*

I love your style of writing. There are a few spelling errors in the first 2 chapters, and I think I spotted 2 grammar errors through the whole story. Other than that, you did a really good job.