This is horribly written.

Uuuuuuugh! Love this so much!

So much more than dirty talking.

He undresses her so that SHE can touch herself better. It's like he goes into her room with the task of getting her nice and ready for her to get off properly. Then he just leaves! Once his work there is done. And he waits downstairs, knowing that after she'll come down with the results!
I'm in love!

My fav Oneshot, my fav Tate ever! Soooooo good!

You really got Tate's creepyiness dead on in my opinion. I like how blunt he was. Good job!

Loved it.

Holy shit this is amazing. I love it.

I also think its funny how you wrote in / But he had shown up, and if he hadn't she might be dead in the bathtub / about Home Invasion, when eventually she died in a bathtub in Piggy Piggy... ahah. genius.

Jesus H. Did you major in dirty talking?

I can't tell you how much I missed the kind of fic that makes me squirm. I am in love with your characterization of Tate- it fits exactly with how I viewed him in the first few episodes. A dude who totally doesn't give a fuck and does whatever he wants and who the hell knows what his motivations are, before everything got so utterly fucked that I couldn't in good consciousness want Violet to get with him (but still did). You brought it up in one of your other fics- He's killed a ton of people, but its the rape that really fucks it for us.

I feel bad that I can't form a more coherent review, because you deserve it. Love your stuff. Don't ever stop.

:O OMG it's amazing

I told you this already - but HOW ON EARTH could I call myself a proper fangirl when I hadn't read and reviewed this fic. It's SO SO good.

I love this Tate. Can we always have this Tate? He's so strong and badassed and funny and sinister and wicked and he frakking KILLED someone for her - which he did but I think more modern fic in the fandom forgets this aspect of his personality.

OKAY - so we begin in Violet's head. I like Violet's head. She's only 15 years old - it makes sense that she's not 100% about everything and I like her caveats and her overthinking. It's adorable. I love how she repeats over and over again how he makes her squirm and that both excites and freaks her the hell out.

I love the first vingette - with the thanks to the dark and then he's just THERE. I love the little bits - like he warns her that they'll see her talking if she turns towards the door and how she can't see whether his dark shirt has blood on it or not.

AND then the interruption... HOLY CRAP ON A CRACKER - I love your Tate. I love his snark and how he's now not giving her suicide tips - he's telling her how to get herself off. FUNNY. Expert in everything, Tate?

/Made up fantasy lovers were always so much more preferable than ones who might actually show up during the act./ SO FREAKING TRUE! LOL!

/ He wasn't telling what he was going to do, he was saying what he would, if he actually started doing it, if. When. Only if she asked nicely and said please./ - Um... this line is really hot and lovely and I love it.

And then finger sucking. Holy frick. Finger sucking.

And the last line is awesome. I like this Violet who seems to know the house is haunted but who doesn't seem to care. :)

You should most definitely turn this into a full story. Dang.

Your stories are amazing!

Congrats!

This was so fucking sexy. You God . 3

Breathtaking and in-character. Various mistakes here and there (proofreading would take care of that). In all, a wonderful piece of fanfiction. I'll be reading more of your stories.

Hello crazy perfection.

This. Fic. I. Can't. Even.