I'm breathless, I really am. You blew me away.

Okay, I'm going to try and make this review coherent, but right now I can barely think because I loved this so much.

I must admit, I'm not the biggest fan of Tily, but in this fic, I ship them. I love your writing style, it flows so well and is beautiful to read and leaves you breathless at the end. YOur writing is just so pretty!

I lovelovelove the concept behind this, how Lily was going crazy, and the drawing theme running through this entire piece. I swear, I almost stopped breathing when she'd drawn her eyes everywhere.

The ending was so beautiful, I can't even.

Amazing, amazing, amazing.

Oh Jenny! This was so beautiful! And amazing! It was dark, but just breathtaking! Lily's characterization and the way you wrote it was...I just loved it!

You know, I'm starting to consider LilyTeddy over VicTeddy...:D Great job!

~Cate

I loved this piece, Jenny. All the emotions running wild in this piece, and then with the repetition with the eyes - it creeped me out, in a good way. I can feel the insanity that Lily feels, and the end - oh gosh, it was amazing.

Loved this piece!

Alice

Oh Merlin, this was scary as heck, but it was brilliant. I loved your language, and the 'smiling eyes' motif was perfect. Your characterizations were clear as crystal, and though it was new to see insane!Lily, I thought you pulled it off extremely well.

Gorgeous, Jenny.

~Roma

I loved this! It was odd and dark but it was very interesting and it definitely captured my attention. I really liked his love for her, despite everything .

aaargh, jens, you're actually just so talented.

this is, was, will always be so beautiful, and yet sad in a weird sort of way. could just be me, though.

uuuh, brilliant characterizations, and well written and I think i'll have to favourite.

Wow...this was really intense and kind of...um...wierd too! (In a good way, though.)

Nice. )

Oh my goodness this was so chilling and thrilling(that rhymed heehee) but amazing and touching all at the same time. Awesome story.

wow! really interesting.

Beautiful :D

It's weird, because I like drawing eyes too... (;

This was pure awesome sauce! Loved it! Funny, cuz a story I'm working on ends with a character going mad and being taken to St. Mugno's too...Weird...O_o

Haha, this is normally the part where I'd offer some constructive criticism, but I can't find anything to criticise. A little weird maybe, but it sure as hell wasn't like anything I've ever read before and I really loved it. Ten thumbs up! The only thing I'll say is that there were a few minor typos, but they were few and far between and didn't take away from the story so it didn't bother me much.

Oh, and you can't really get ink poisoning from drawing on your skin-urban legend. But that doesn't really matter, just thought I'd point that out.

FAVOURITED! :)