This was amazing...so beautiful. Thank you for writing it! :')

beatiful

Ah, a good second person PoV always brings a certain intimacy into the storytelling. The ending was exactly what the ending to the game felt like, bittersweet while it lasted, and I Must Scream when you think about it afterwards... The last line in particular is very poignant.

Also, an incredible capture of the character when you said that if sex was planned Akihiko would have been awkward and sweaty (in a wrong way)!

Oh my... This is mesmerizing. I was reading it without breathing, I simply forgot about it. I was breathing sharply in awe, so lost in the words you wrote. It's so picturesque, so vivid, I can feel the sun on my cheeks, the rain pouring down my face, sweet taste of sugar, the feeling of need, hell, I even scent the touch of lips on my forehead, I can smell the leather. I am simply charmed by your style of writing, by this fanfiction. The atmosphere is lovely, the characters are brilliantly submitted. I wanted to cry, to whimper to sob the entire time I was reading it, I was so much enchanted by it. The ending took me by suprise, I wasn't expecting that, and thank you for that. Thank you for the dulcet piece of synchronized words. And at the end, I want to dedicate this quote for you, because you are the flower that smells : “I’m not asking you to describe the rain falling the night the archangel arrived; I’m demanding that you get me wet. Make up your mind, Mr. Writer, and for once in your life be the flower that smells rather than the chronicler of the aroma. There’s not much pleasure in writing what you live. The challenge is to live what you write.” Eduardo Galeano

wow.. wat a fic

That was fucking awesome. Genius was the part where you took the 'I love you' part and changed it to goodbye. Was not expecting that at all and it was absolutely genius. I actually had to stop reading for a second and just say "Damn" It was incredibly impacting.

I'm kinda sad that you don't write Persona anymore.

Oh my god... ALL THE FEELS.

wonderful. just so detailed!

That was sweet Λ_Λ

Gosh!This was seriously one amaaaazing fic!I just loved how you kept the Persona feeling there using the second person view!The characters,sod,they were so well done,Yukari's persistence,the way the main character thinks that she's pretty but doesn't really feel anything!The gradual developing of the touches and the looks,amazing!The style in this,the details,the words you used are so beautifully meshed together,everything was just perfect!And that ending,oh god,that ending just made me cry like a total idiot!T_T!

Great fic and great work,keep it up!

aww~ it's so sweet! Thx 4 writing! *bow*

Omg, this was simply beautiful. I love how the story was formatted, it was very interesting, plus the awesome description. How it was summed it up really impacted the ending. Overall I thought it was a very good story.

Beautiful.

Oooh! Shinji next, Shinji next! Please do one with Shinji pairing I don't care _

I almost cried at the end. This was lovely work. The second-person perspective is quite rare and made me feel involved with the story. Overall, it was sweet and hot like a good doughnut! c: