This story was absolutely magnificent.

I absolutely adore your writing, and the diverse ways that you write these characters.

This story in particular had a bit of everything; the angst, the danger, the love. Thank you for writing this gem of a story.

He sounds like a bitter person, perhaps blaming his handicap.

Is he blind?

Wow what an amazing story! Couldn’t stop reading this I blew through in no time. Glad this finished with a happy ending they deserve it!

Wow..."Own it then. But don't live it. Or it will ruin you." Words I needed to hear, survivors guilt is hell. Thank you for sharing.

I'm sooo late to the party, but what a party! I lovin' this.

Hello. I know this a little late for a reply...but for the past two weeks I have been reading all your stories and I loved them. I just loved them. Your way of writing humour adding suspense and romance to it. Wonderful. I loved it. Keep writing.

Wonderful beautiful story.

Great story

and of course there were times when her purse was UNATTENDED and she didn't TELL ANYONE about extra keys in her PURSE to which James APPARENTLY helped himself. In her defense, she HAS been really sick.

OMG! Could James somehow doctored Bella's inhalers so that she is worse than a normal cold? yes I'm paranoid!

If you didn't see a body, they ain't dead. That's soap opera 101, right!? Someone is gaslighting Edward. James and...? "When all of the impossibilities have been eliminated, the possible, no matter how improbable, must be the answer." or some such fiddle faddle.

So, either Edward is blind or losing his vision. Sad.

Thank you for your time and writing. It is a good read and I wanted more of this family. This chapter hit home and was a riot. Edward got his happy ever after and deserved it.

YES! Lots and lots of tissues. I was just as touched and happy for him. Good chapter.