WAIT WAIT WAIT what happened to the 46ish chapters that were up?! i only got to 35 and was SO into this story i swear!i wish you luck publishing this because this is such a moving story and dealing with anxiety or with friends and family that has anxiety as well as other mental health issues is difficult, i love how real this made everything seem and how you portrayed the legitimate struggle. thank you for putting your thoughts and feelings into this story, if you do decide to put the other chapters back up i would be SOO happy! or did you transfer over to ao3? mwah~! ️

That's amazing! When you do get it publish, please update this with a link because I would love to buy it!~ As soon as I saw the notification for this in my email I got super excited and was like, I loved this story but I couldn't remember all the details so after a few minutes it all came back and now I regret not rereading this now. But I wish you luck and hope to see this on my bookshelf someday. Thanks for the update and the best of luck!

Have you thought about doing a kind of sequel where it's just extras from the story?
It would be interesting to see people's reactions to Roxas's career choice, and to see Roxas move in with Cloud, Sora and the others.
Then we could also see a scene with Axel, Roxas and Xion eating ice cream at the clock tower together, and have an explanation on why Xion couldn't meet Roxas (I personally started believing she might have been paralysed).

I know it's been I while since you wrote this piece and (given that it is your only Kingdom Hearts piece) you might not be invested in Kingdom Hearts anymore, but I really loved this story. I found it two days ago and have been reading it every chance I get.

Regardless of whether or not you do end up writing more for the story, I wanted to let you know it was really intriguing, and the chances in Point of View worked in your favor, I'm really glad you had Sora's PoV in the story, because we really got to see how everything was affecting Sora. But the attachment we built for Roxas by having been in his PoV for so long was still there and we were able to still feel his presence through the journal entries while in Sora's PoV, so it never felt like a loss of flow or pacing had occurred with the chance of view.

I am glad that you finished the story, at times I was worried it might not have been completed, but you writting style, and character development had me so addicted that I had to keep reading regardless, and I was so invested in the plot that I could not make myself jump ahead to check because I did not want anything to be spoilt.

So in summary; I like this story so much that I want - no make that need - more.
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I have to say this is one of the most amazing fanfictions I have ever read!

I love your writing style and word choice. I love the detail and inclusions of so many characters. I love how you wrote each character so distinctly that they feel like real people with individual personalities. I love the way they play off each other, for better or for worse. I think you've done one of the best jobs I've ever seen at writing what anxiety and other mental illnesses feel like and look like/how they affect everyone around the one suffering. Everyone in this had something redeeming about them even if they weren't my favorite character, which is something that is amazingly difficult to pull off and deserves praise.

This is a fic I am unashamed to say had me alternately in tears and laughing my ass off as I tried to be quiet at 1am. I loved each twist and turn and they all felt so amazing, even if they hurt. I would highly recommend this to anyone I know who reads fanfiction and is interested in Kingdom Hearts, which is sadly fewer than I'd like because this work of art deserves to be shared. Hell, I'd recommend this to anyone who wants to see what fanfiction can truly be like. It honestly rivals the quality of some books I've read, shows I've seen, or movies I've watched in terms of story, how the content is handled, and over all emotion evoked.

All in all, you've done an amazing job and I just want to say thank you for sharing this with all of us. *leaves a plate of Aerith's flower cookies as thanks*

I'm absolutely shocked about how well you make the reader understand Roxas' and Sora's situation and how they feel. I haven't read that many stories about people with psychological problems but when I have, I often find it har to understand why someone acts the way they do. While reading this story though, I've always understood why (including their mother after the 'Venus reveal', even though that far from justifies what she's done, you still made me understand her mind enough to see why she did those awful things). When I didn't think something made sense, you explained it later on.
I also like the characters: how they fit their personalities from Kingdom Hearts, yet aren't the exactly the same (Sora being super optimistic, Xemnas isn't evil etcetera...) I like how Ventus, Terra and Aqua are a part of the story too. I like them.

It's a really good story with a good mix both humorous and serious moments. The only thing I wonder now is what's gonna happen with Sora's and Roxas' mother...

Oh and you made Kairi and Riku totally awesome! :D

I keep reading this story even though I've read it before and I know I don't really like How It Ends but I can't stop myself from rereading it

lol

I Laughed. I got misty eyed.
I had to walk away from the computer a few times because it was too painful to read all at once.
Do yourself a favor.
Never stop writing.

This is an amazing story. im sure there were some typos and weirdnesses, but the story and emotion and everything was so good. So very good. I can't wait to read more of tour work.

Is there going to be another story? Please? :-D

Forgot to log in. :3

*reading fanfiction, sees Dangan Ronpa. Stares at Dangan Ronpa refereance for 10 minutes*

I love Dangan Ronpa.

I honestly don't think I have lived a story more than I have loved this one. Every night I read some of it I would say "just one more chapter" and read 10. Thank you so much for writing such a fantastic story.

I looovvveeeee thiiisss story! Roxas is my favorite and he is so human in this story that I can really relate. The relationships between characters are so strained ans strong that it really creates an honesty in your writing. I am definitely going to look for more of your writing. :)

Sorry for not having an account but this fanfiction is my life. I read it in about 3 days and I love the Axel's caring personality. I cried my eyes out when Roxas lost his memory and forgot Axel. If you could, please make a sequel/prequel whichever it is, I'd LOVE to read more of this amazing writing!

so not gonna lie. this is one of the two fanfic that made me laugh, cry and die a little.
Your writing style is extremely easy to read, but intriguing enough to hold my interest. To be honest, I read this story twice in like 2 weeks lmao.
amazing fic, and thanks for sharing, I'm sure it wasn't easy, but do keep writing 3