Good job,

though i prefer the name shepard than john when i refer to the commander.

I don't like the bold letters

Damn bro, this shit is pretty good! Keep up the good work

I completely agree to this day I still wish they would redo the ending

Your story keeps getting better and better I can’t wait to see how it ends

Wow so good

The moment you said you’re not gonna follow Canon your story got immensely better and it was really good to begin with I realize sometimes games do things because if they told it like a story like you’re doing it wouldn’t work in the context of a game but your fight between samurai and more and was amazingly well written

Can’t wait to find out what’s going on with the shadow broker and the elusive man

I love this every chapter your story goes further and further off Canon

I really like the fact that you’re creating your own story much more dynamic

I completely agree with this chapter I never liked the ending of the third game and beyond just the ending the game itself was nowhere near as good as one into just doing something as stupid as taking out the middleground I don’t understand why they did that over the years I have come to terms with the ending and it doesn’t bother me as much as it used to but I agree with you I usually play the series and right before the final charge to go up to the citadel I just stopped again and start over or play whatever other game I’m going to play because the ending is just so difficult to sit through but the series as a whole is still the best trilogy of games ever made in my opinion and that’s including the ending that’s a testament to how good the series is that even with one of the three entries been subpar it’s Still the best

Your depiction of every character is so spot on well done

Another wonderful chapter you do dialogue so well

Another wonderful chapter I love the way you to pick the trepidation about joining from Shepherd I feel like too many stories have him instantly jump on board and everything is just OK now let’s go get the collectors showing that he almost didn’t do it is much more believable wonderfully well written

Fuck if this fic isn’t as good the 2nd time as it is the first, if anything its better.

Just read this, and could not agree with you more! Anyway, I know I've come to this Fanfic late, but just wanted to say you have done a wonderful job, and am looking forward to continuing the read!