I really loved this story. My only complaint is that the wrong homophone was used quite often, alloud instead of allowed and so forth. It was a very enjoyable read in spite of that. Very fluffy and one of my favorite Severitus portrayals.

This was so... Cute? Amazing? Heartwarming? Lovely? One ofnthe best things ive read? I can't find a word for it. Its similar to 'Panthers Heart' (another fanfiction i recomend if you havent read it, its harry x draco) with the cat animagus Harry thing becoming a famillier but other that it was so different. I didnt know what to expect when i started reading this and tbh i didnt think it would be so good, but its amazing and needs a LOT more credit as it is well written and has an amazing and unique plot line. I wasnt expecting the voldemort thing but it worked amazingly. It ended well to. I would love to know more, but i dont need to. It leaves some to the imagination but closes enough that you arnt left with loads of questions. Overall just read it!

I love you
thank you so much for writing this
xxx

Love is story!

I do find that colar rather ... controversial. Will Harry be able to put it of if he is in great danger and need to transform himself?

I can’t believe I reached the end. Much too short
Is there more?

"Settling herself in the chair, she resisted the urge to Transfigure the chair into something more appropriate looking and coloured black." same girl, same

Lovely story! I do have one question though: "Neither can live, while the other survives." Do you think this means that Harry can only die by being killed by Voldy or will Voldy's piece be released, upon Harry's death? Your story *does* hint at Horcruxes, even if only in Dumbledork's mental musings.
Rowling's 'Dimpledick' was such a *fool*, as well as an evil, Machiavellian monster: He had 10 g-d YEARS to to suss-out, locate, and go after the soul pieces, but instead Rowling devises a g-d *SCAVENGER HUNT*, with CHILDREN facing the dangers (NO, unless you are a sick, twisted individual; you DO NOT write stories *for CHILDREN*, that thrusts *children* into the path of a psychopath; to be tortured, maimed, and killed in an *ADULTS WAR*!)! She also demonstrated her callous disregard for Dimbulbdork's followers and loyal adherents: She has OotP members dropping like flies, following the orders of the whiskered wanker and had no qualms highlighting that the old bastard never personally got his hands 'dirty'! Some 'hero'!
Thank YOU for showcasing a plausible and more SANE alternative to Rowling's pitiful offering! You ROCK!
Sincerely,
MelJ :D

Yes, I know it's 'old', but I'm commenting anyway: Screw Albus Dumblefuck any way! I can honestly say, he's the slimiest and scariest character I've *ever* had the misfortune of reading and I'm 56 years old and a rabid biblioholic since the age of 5; so that's saying something!
That Rowling was allowed to canonize this prick to the level of "martyred 'hero" and Harry to 'mourn' the SOB, without the 'fans'/readers being up in arms about it, absolutely boggles the mind!
Thanks for writing such an interesting story; I don't know how I missed it, but it's going into my favorites now!
MelJ :D

You are a great author, I love you works they are awesome! I have read this fic 12 times already and it never gets old, I love it well done. Cookies for your, a never ending pouch full! Please continue writing! go Bloody Red Queen!.! XD .

Thanks for sharing This wonderful piece of your imagination!

aww my heart! I loved the ending

Love it. Love it. LOVE IT! This was so well written and enjoyable all the way from start to finish. The ending was so sweet and fperfect that I couldn’t not love it ️️

Awwwwwww! *Coos with joy* Severus is showing his soft side. I nearly fell into a faint when Severus smiled. I love the story so far and keep up the great work you are doing.

This is the cutest fanfiction I have ever read xx