Besides one or two grammatical concerns (sorry, I can't help it), I really, honestly enjoyed this story. It was cute without being too fluffy, and you captured the characters' personalities very well. I'll be adding this to my favorites and looking at your other work. Good job!

That was cute and adorable. :)

This was really cute. I love seeing different takes on what it would be like if these two interacted, and this is wonderfully good-natured and laid-back. Also, love the reference to photography for Madison. She's a photojournalist, so it makes sense that she'd know a good picture when faced with it. ;)

The only thing that throws me off is Jayden's location. Technically, he was supposed to have been sent there from Washington DC, so he wouldn't exactly be a car ride away, but that's the only gripe I have with this. The rest was a lot of fun to read, and if you do decide to go back to this fandom in the future, I'd love to see what you could do.