Too bad you left this story here... Your readers don't get to find out:
-whether Ron will come up with some idiotic plot to prove Apollonia is evil
-why Arthur doesn't discipline his son Ron, because it's HIS house not Ron's so HE should decide who gets to come and go - will Arthur and Molly tell him to move the heck OUT of the Burrow?
-why Ginny's being such a jealous b***h (If she's at all like canon, she's felt *entitled* to marry Harry since she was a toddler. I think this is a bad, bad pairing anyway - too much drama for Harry - he deserves a quiet restful life after all he's been through; and anyway, if she's jealous of a *sister*, she'll be jealous and manipulative all the time.)
-how Harry and Apollonia will interact with Teddy and Andromeda
-what about everybody's NEWT exams?
-what about "Lord Harry Potter-Black" and "Lady Prince" in the future
-and hey, whatever happened to Draco and Narcissa, anyway?, were they killed in that building collapse, kidnapped away somewhere else, or what?

I'm sad that you haven't updated this in three and a half years. You've left a few threads hanging that I'd love to see resolved. I've bookmarked this, and will check back in another few year, in hope you've added to the story.

Chapter 20: That's right, you previously mentioned *Ron* put wards around *his parents'* house to keep Apollonia out. What kind of weak lily-livered buffoon is Arthur Weasley, to let his *son* (his youngest son, at that) decide who comes and goes at *his* house? You'd think Arthur would enlist Bill the curse- (and presumably ward-) breaker to get rid of that ward.

Chapter 16: Why hasn't Molly tossed Ron out of the house yet? He's old enough to live on his own?

Ginny's jealousy is poison (in this case, I think she's jealous here of how much time Harry wants to spend with Apollonia). I hate that JKR paired her with Harry. Harry needs a warm caring loving person as a mate. I'm always happy to read Evil/Manipulative/Dark Ginny stories.

Chapter 15: What is Charlie's role? Charlie, Bill, and Percy are all examples of Weasley children who left home just as soon as they were able, to get away from their wussy weak father, and their shrill bossy smothering over-controlling mother.

soo good! i love the prophecy! Did hermione know about zara? Why didn't she tell apolla? Can we please have a draco/apollonia moment soon?

Super good! Please keep on going getting super interesting!

Hmm... Well I have guesses about what is going on, but I'm ridiculously curious... Ha, excited for the next chapter. )

I have to say, that i have devoured both the first book and what you have finished of this one. Very intriguing story line, and im so glad that you gave malfoy redeeming qualities. I'm also a little impressed at how Death Eater/ Pro-Pureblood-esqe you have made Ron sound with his anti slytherin mentality.
One more thing, I really love how you have kept Fred alive in a way and have given George a purpose in this story.
Very Very well done cant wait for the next chapter

The wand won't work because there's a Death Eater stuck underneath? Just a guess :)
Update soon!

really good and super mysterious! please keep it up!

really good go on! i like how george is willing to help them find their own twin bond. hope harry finds rockwood soon. whose the girl that george lost?

I love the amount of thought you've put into these stories. ) Honestly, they are great I love reading them. ) Update soon? )

soo good go on! apolla/draco moments please!

Gah! you had to end it right there, didn't you! :( LOL another great chapter and I'm looking forward to what happens next.