I like the story. I just thought it was going to be from that point on from the summary.

please write some more. it's good.

please write some more. what happens next. what will the x-men's reaction be when they find out that rogue now works for magneto, is with john, and is part of the brotherhood. will her relationship to mystique be revealed to everybody.

please update soon:O)

Was kind of lost at the beginning of this chapter because I wasn't sure who's point of view it was in.

This story is Awesome! Love it I want to read more of this ASAP

Bobby is such an asshat in this..

This Chapter Made Me Hate Bobby Even More, I Never Did Like Him. Keep Up The Great Work :) I Can't Wait 4 The Next Up Date

Great story, can't wait for the next chapter!

I liked the chapter, I hope you have one maybe later about Bobby's reaction to the baby, or maybe he and kitty fall down a hole...with spikes at the end. Glad for the update and hope you do well on your paper.

me parece increible esta historia por favor continua!

I'm sorry I haven't commented on the other chapters, but I was extremely wrapped up in reading your story! I cannot tell you how captivating this story is!
It is just simply amazing! [

John dont be jealous! No ones hotter than you! (Nyuk nyuk puns)

Can't wait to see what will happen next.

FOR A SECOND I THOUGHT IT WAS GONNA BE REMY'S BABY. my shock is over. im interested for the amount of jealousy the next chapter shall contain. great job! till next time!