I thought it was brilliant, smut has never been so classy. I loved the perspective even though I was skeptical at first on the first person view.

This deserves more of a review than that XD

Alright, so on to the task. I enjoy the way that you manipulate the perspective on a possible relationship between Kurama and Hiei. There are so many things that are true in this, like that Kurama wouldn't bottom just out of experience and age, or that Hiei isn't a simple character. He doesn't just love or hate. It's not that he's a super emo character either, where he needs to love and be cared for or anything, it's jut how they are and how they would be together.

Thus, I highly enjoy the thought you put into the workings of their relationship and the dance they play around.

Certainly enjoyable :D

Good Job love the story

This is amazing :D