Wow! This story is great!

There are loads of things here that have already been said, but my favourite moment was probably Linith talking about how the Familiar should balance their master's weakness. Such a beautiful scene, and I couldn't help but feel really sad for Precia there...

I just need one word for definite this story INCREDIBLE. I read all the story the same day at the end i was flabergasted. Thanks for this story.

Just think you should know: I spent a solid five hours reading this fic from start to finish. Seeing as it's now 7:00 AM, that might have been ill-advised. I'll have to take precautions when I start reading the sequel.

Good luck with whatever it is you're writing now!

Awesome story! The plot, characters and emotions are realistic and believable. I congratulate you, Immatrael, and thanks for your work!

great work

Brilliant ending, kudos!

That was powerful, you tied up everything so brilliantly, keeping the surprise until the end and my word the twist on her canon plan was genius, that final ending, Nanoha's resolution, her bond with her new quasi family, ah, so wonderful!

That was a chaotic, cavalcade of epic scenes and emotional roller coasters, kudos!

That was powerful, brilliant, evocative and truly, grandly epic! That Nanoha holding Vesta scene made me wanna weep though.

Linith is the best, nuff said XD Seriously though amazing take on her and familiars!

That scene between Precia and Fate broke my heart.

Also wow, it is cool to see Precia happy and confident.

Great set up and exposition, I loved all the exchanges!

That was epic and powerful, kudos.

That was a powerful chapter, great interactions between Nanoha and Quint that was a fantastic segment and the closing of the net and the epic battle at the end, kudos!

A very impressive chapter, once again your characterization and world building are absolutely astounding and amazing, I love the stuff with Nanoha's family especially and Vesta is great.

Another brilliant chapter, you do amazing work keeping so many characters and sub plots in the air and making them all feel important and worthwhile!

Another fantastic chapter, Fate is so good, Nanoha's mother was great, surprising twist with the seed and loved the reunion with her friends!