Welp, that's it for this, then! I think I've already shared my views on this. Time to check your profile for other stories… :3

mm.…more physicality issues… humanish dialga could probably fit in a number of places that dragon dialga could not, don't you think? Questions, questions…

While my love of your ending is in no way invalidated, this chapter brings more to light a qualm I've had with your story since near the beginning: Pokemon being actually physically a lot like humans…while also not.
To be more clear, my frustration lies in the unexplained technicalities of how exactly a pokemon can have two physical forms simultaneously. Even worse, clothes enter and leave the person, so they can('t?) be seen while on, yet they've got to go *somewhere* when they take them off. A pile of clothes isn'selectively intangible simply because a pokemon wore them.
The more I think about this, the more physical interactions don't make sense! It's a cool concept and all, but you're gonna have to do a better job if you want to keep both worlds intact. :

...lol, not like you're going to do anything *now*, but I'm just sayin'… An explanation would be nice…

I swear… that was the most beautiful and fulfilling ending that's ever existed. I was actually moved to tears. By the *ending*. Do you realize how incredible that is? Endings are supposed to be at least a little sad, since it won't continue. But you did it so *well*. True genius to have Alfie test drive human life again before going back. Sure, it doesn't seem all that novel, but it worked out so *gracefully* for your story...

Truly, good job. It was so heartwarming to read the end of this chapter. Thank you. :)

…and then there's more! lol. :D

Umm… lol you pasted the chapter again near the end of this one. The whole thing repeats…

The chapter repeated 2 times

Great story. Chapter 20 needs to be cleaned up a bit repeats itself twice and wierded me out. Other wise really great, read it twice and loving it!

I have to say, this is a really nice story. I have thought of writing Pokemon stories myself but I never could think of way to do so. This is very good and earns a spot in my Favorites.

This story...

Best fic ever, period. Sadly, it's done and the sequel is frozen in stone.

oh wow!

DAMN that guy is smooth! I totally melted from his words! Then the last line got me. I was like... "Ooooohhhh... That's right... Damn!"

This was a wonderful story. I just read all of it within two days, and it was just wonderful. I found it extremely unique in how you made the characters hybrids or Pokemorphs or whatever the Arceus they're called, but only from the perspectives of the Pokemon themselves. That made it very easy to relate with the characters, and very philosophical in that it made me question how exactly the mind of a Pokemon works. Truly a unique touch. I salute you.

I absolutely loved the little moments with Alfie and Yami, and my heart positively ached when the former was sent back to the human world (dimension? perspective?). Honestly, I don't think I've ever read about a more interesting and dynamic couple before. Kudos!

All in all, I loved this story, and I can't wait to see more from you. :)

you have made this into an astounding story that has amazed me throughout and hope you continue to add to this story with bonus chapters every now and then in the entire story I only found one plot hoe unless I missed something. If etoile can communicate via psychic powers then shouldn't alfie who seems to be somewhat intelligent have come up with the most basic and easy solution ever tell lyra who she is through etoile's telepathy that way she could remain a pokemon while simultaneously keeping her former best friend and being able to communicate with her getting the best of both worlds which she seems conflicted about up until the end. Also how do the human formed pokemon translate to the way humans percieve them since a chikorita would be much smaller than a 5 foot tall person and a maganium bigger so how would the movements match up say in a combat situation or when moving through a forest as a smaller pokemon should theoretcally be able to move through undergrowth etc better than a larger one.

I want to see a thing continuing the daycare chapter showing what those two went through after yami's devious prank

Hey. Hollywood. I'm a peace of poop and a pokemon maaaaaaaaaaaan HELP ME OR I DIE HELP