a good if quick but chapter 17 is just a waste of space as it could more easily have been tacked on the end of chapter 16 but tha aside nice little read thank you

ugh. that's all I'm going to say

A good story I thank you for the read. It ended to fast in my honest opinion but that is me. I would have loved to see how their lives went on after the tournament, even just a few paragraphs would have done me fine lol. but other than that I enjoyed the story and look forward to reading more of your works in the future.

A cute interesting story! Thought Luna would want to be a Dragon.

? Definitely an Interesting story plot!

You got the ages wrong you basically got the date of the movie Wrong I'm sorry I just can't read anymore I really really hate to complain but seriously Lilly was 18 when she had Harry and the movie didn't even come out by that time I really really hate to complain but I can't read this

This has to have been written by a child. If so, amazing job! Enjoyable for a young teen level. If this was written by an adult or intended for actual adults, much improvement is needed.

He had no reason to keep them out? Is a school a hotel now? Since when was dumbledor in the habit of hosting guests without reason in the school? What reason does he have to let them stay for the entire school year? This makes no sense. Try to use some actual logic and reason behind your literary decisions. This entire chapter was forced against any sound reason. This hurts your story significantly in addition to the many other mistakes.

Note to the author. I’m done reading this. You continue to have your characters make monumentally retarded decisions and I no longer care if they live or die so this story isn’t worth my time any more. Sad because it could have been pretty good.
Having your characters make stupid decisions so that you can have drama moments is ok occasionaly, not with every breath.
I’ve lost all interest in this.

Stupid decisions are being made by just about every single character.

This story was pretty decent to start out, but but it started going downhill rapidly around when it reached Hogwarts. That was when it become clear that you had no idea where you taking this story, as every chapter seemed to introduce more plot threads, only for the next chapters to toss them out and forget about them. So the plot just kind if meandered around without anyone doing much of anything for the rest of the story. There was no resolution, because there was no real conflict. And switching the focus to Hermione makes it clear that this story doesn't even know who it's about.

I have to say that I am kind of disappointed that the only part of HTTYD in this story is the basic design of Night Furies and a mention of the movie. (Night Furys? Im not sure what the correct way of spelling this is.)
It is indeed your story, and you can do whatever you want with it, and my comment really isnt necessary, so bye!

(The plot is interesting, though, and really original!)

did not love this, same words repeated constantly, protagonists are too trusting of guy with a humble name

i liked it

This was not quite what I expected for this crossover. What I did expect I'm not sure, but it wasn't Harry turning into a dragon. It was a good plot, well written. Except for the many times that the incorrect word was used, it took a bit away from the pure enjoyment of the story. Thank you for sharing your thoughts.