Your writing again. I had to go back and read this first. You should get a first place prize for this one. Oh they crying babies she does not wind up with Ed... duh he is awful.

It was an entertaining, and creative story.

Really is hysterically funny.

Very entertaining. Lots of personal issues with some characters, but those can easily be ignored when the story is good.

Intriguing

Getting too funny!

Sorry, not an ounce of sympathy or caring for the whiny.

Carlisle's an idiot and so is Jasper if he listens to him. Some people need to die, Maria's one of them, end of story.

I really loved the realness of this story. They made very human mistakes. And as much as I cried over it, I liked that not everyone survived. Too many times in stories, it's about all the odds being against them and everyone survived without a scratch. That's all well and good and I'm always happy for it. However it does take away some of the believability, if you can even say that about a vampire story. Anyways! Loved it and can't wait to read more from you.

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It took me a few days but I just finished this story and holy hell I love it. The ups and downs and emotional rollercoaster of characters is something I don't find often in these stories so when I do I thoroughly enjoy them. Thank you for such a good read!

Loved it

How does Clarion have “the piecing blue eyes of an angel” when it’s already been stated that he’s a vampire? :P

I wish we had more of Maria. It’s quite a surprise to read of her in that light. Very interesting! Thanks!

Warning to other readers: this is 80% and E/B story. Bella and Garrett’s relationship is barely touched on.