hey lets be serious
gimme next chapt please~

I like how you were taking this slow between law and luffy and it's actually really cute how luffy was kind of eager with helping law.

Okay, okay, okay.

I read this story about a year ago and I fell in love. I'm rereading t again, but I NEED NEED to see how it ends. Please, oh please finish this story. It's torture! D':

Please please please update i got so hooked in this story! :(

Hahahaha! Zoro having a sex talk with Luffy! So unlikely but difficult to ignore. Law is so addictive. ;D

Wow... loved it... great plot line... Luffy is always innocent... Law is scary...

I see Kizaru being the kind of teacher that, while still continuing to lecture, would walk up to the desk of a sleeping student and kick the desk to wake them up XD Aokiji would probably care less. Akainu would be terrifying... Fujitora would probably be interesting XD

I thought the third-person stuff Luffy does was a bit over-used, but it was still an entertaining read.

Awesome first chapter. Thrown off a little by Traffy calling everyone mister, but I assume that's what the ya means. Thought you did a pretty good job with their personalities, I think all the character connections are hilarious XD

Omg loved thiss when is chapter 7 :D xxxx

My friend and I love this story and we really want you to continue it if you can. QQ We'll be brought to tears to see this beautiful fic come back. I can't even begin to describe how much I want to continue reading it and ugh. I just love it so much.

Please update the story! I'd love to see what happens after...

Please update this soon I'm addicted to this story its so great!

Just want to say, Luffy is the sexiest uke in the entirety of the world and I directly challenge anyone, ANYONE who says that it isn't perfectly portrayed in this story. Rest my case. Okay, one thing i love is so in-character your people were. Luffy isn't some clueness virgin who nows nothing about sexual intercourse, and mind that I love it, and Law's still the sleazy bastard we all know and love. That's a plus in my books. Learning vocab from this too so thanks. Also, the smut scenes, oh my god I've never ever ... you know what, you just got me attracted to piercings. Great, a new fetish. Have to say, imagining Luffy with a cuff is just so... so...orgasmic? IDK, Luffy's is the hottest cutest mess.
Anyways, loving this VERY much right now. Do I have to mention how cute Kidd's tsundere actions are?

I adore everything about your story! It was such a joy to read. The plot and the characterisations are fantastic! I look forward to what happens next!

Brilliant story! I especially love how you manage to put your own spin to the characters without them losing their authenticity. I can't wait for the next chapter!