| Reviews for A Beautiful Line |
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   ColonelJayWrites chapter 6 . 6/13 Wheatley's a pervert, GLaDOS is naughty and Chell's plain confused. I love it! |
| ColonelJayWrites chapter 1 . 6/13 Wheatley's a pervert, GLaDOS is naughty and Chell's confused about her sexuality. XD |
| ColonelJayWrites chapter 4 . 6/13 Hahaha! Wheatley has some material! XD |
| Eden chapter 1 . 5/6/2015 Love it! |
| Darkwater's Remorse chapter 9 . 7/9/2014 This was quite a beautiful story. The conflict between GLaDOS and her love for Chell was well written out. The bonus WheatDOS and Chelley subplot was good too. And the ending was sweet (Combine suckers never stood a chance). Other than some grammar errors, I pretty much read the story in the character's voices - even though Chell was mute! Anyways, thank you so much for writing this story! |
| caloricmangos chapter 9 . 6/28/2014 hope they rebuilt the place |
| Funnybombninja chapter 9 . 10/24/2013 Poor appature |
| Quantumphysica chapter 9 . 6/7/2013 I liked it... Dear GLaDOS; she's my favorite villain xD I loved how you described her conflicting emotions... And a happy ending, yay! |
| Quantumphysica chapter 6 . 6/7/2013 Wheatley, you pervy voyeur xD |
| Quantumphysica chapter 4 . 6/7/2013 Teehee xD GLaDOS experiencing orgasm, Wheatley being like *drool* P |
| n-ovacaiine chapter 9 . 3/25/2013 I hate to say it, but I don't care for this ending at all. It may be sweet and fluffy and such, but I was honestly expecting the farm to be only temporary, and Aperture would be rebuilt while Chell, GLaDOS and Wheatley stayed at the farm. Aperture was where their relationship really began, and where it should have ended. I still love the story, but please make a sequel where Aperture is rebuilt. PLEASE! |
| Spacecore6676 chapter 9 . 7/6/2012 Great story! And for the person below who asked what happened to Space, Fact and adventure cores, I think they were destroyed along with Aperture ( |
| Neo Noivern chapter 9 . 6/6/2012 GREAT ENDING! The only thing on my mind is what happened to the Fact, Space, and Adventure Spheres...I probably missed something...I'll go back and read later... Best Wishes |
| GLaDHal chapter 9 . 6/2/2012 What a great read, can't wait to see more of your work. |
| Anon723723723 chapter 9 . 5/30/2012 And then you blow up! No seriously, they did blow up. And the ending part with them acting 'normal' was pretty sweet. Good job, and I look forward to the sequel. |
