Reviews for The Jewels of the Moon Kingdom |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story! PLEASE Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, okey. So maybe this is the stuppidest review ever because you never updated this back, but i was kinda in love with this story. Idk, why but this has this mistery to it cause we can only see Endy point of view and that doesn't ususally happen, and idk, i actually enjoy re-reading it an all |
![]() ![]() the little kunzite/venus scenes in this story are for what i life for |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, Another great chapter! I loved how they forgo about the bet after getting so excited over it. For people who are that far back in technology it was totally accurate! I liked Venus's punishment too, hahaa. Wonderfully written and amazing characterization. Hopefully you get back to writing it sometime! Or even just post the Friday thing you have written out of order! Thank you again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Youre an amazing writer! Such amazing detail in this chapter as well, it could have been a boring scene easily but you kept all the imagery perfect and it was a great chapter for it! The next one should be fun too! This is a great story. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Poor serenity, but I love your characterization is her. It's spot on in all regards! I also love seeing Luna and Artemis too. Thanks again! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooooo! What's a fun chapter! I loved that he jumped after her of course! But it was a fantastic way to throw in the girls powers too! Super fun and it was wonderful overall! Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! Such such such such a great story! I love these stories and this is just the absolute best! So much detail and so wonderfully written, and it's very well thought out too. It's amazing! Thanks so much! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm in love with story! I can't wait to see what happens!Are you going to make a sequel to when everyone is reincarnated on Earth and all their adventures?Update soon please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is a very nice story, I hope you manage to resurrect it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, the age thing finally came up! Wonderful. I hope this keeps being as good as it is. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the newer habit of referring to them by planets. I hope it sticks. Beyond that, I hope to see what cultural norms and differences there are. What I've seen so far is good-quality work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like where you're taking this story, especially with Earth not being aware of life on other planets. The reveal will certainly be hilarious. But I really don't like the change in names. Really. You could have kept them and no one would have cared, and this is just annoying to me to read. It's not a deal-breaker at all, though, so I'm definitely going to keep going. Also, if Serenity has ruled for 500 years and presumably lived for some time prior to that, would that put the Princess and her senshi at somewhere between 100-200 years of age, and will that reveal come into play if so? Well, I'll just keep reading and see where this takes me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update looking forward to reading about the ice skating. |
![]() ![]() ![]() A really different look at the Silver Millenium. I love it. |