Salutations,
Goodness my small tender talent. Jetfire you did an amazing job, do you think you could be my beta reader, I could use some help with developing my writing talent. If not no biggie, I won't judge you for it. Your amazing.
I would write a sequel with AJ and Prince Ashtail in Equestria. Hehe I love those two.

Fantastic, absolutely marvelous! I just finished reading, and it was well worth it.

Well. That was the most epic rendition of "three ponies go out on a walk to pick up a flower" I have ever seen.
Great story, superb writing, wonderful characterization and thrilling pacing.
You, sir/lady, are an excellent writer. And you just happened to make my night.

Great story. Thanks

wow

A third of the way down on the 10th chapter i was like "wait was…is that a mistake or was that ummmmmmm i don't think this said pairing…did it?"

Wow! Great story hope their is a second book where we learn the others talents.

amazing story, i loved and was touched by this story so much i made a account just to tell the author how wonderful of a job i thought he did. and will like to say not even a squad of pegauses could have dont that much courage, loyalty, friendship! :D

Was awesome :)

That was an AWESOME story! :DDD You should seriously write more and more. You've got an awesome gift in writing. I hope to see more from you!

I agree; this IS one of the best mlp fanfictions I've ever read!

OHMYGOD. THIS. This is the bestest of the best MLPFIM fics I've ever read. You, dear author, are AMAZING!

Wow...just wow this is one of the best mlp stories iv ever read. Hats off to you sir.

...Beautiful...when i read Fanfiction...i open my heart to it...and i felt yours touch mine...i've read plenty a fic...and your's is one of the few who reached me...literally FEW...only 7 of the 982 read succeeded in impressing me..you're my 8th. Thank you...continue writing.

WOW WHAT A STORY! I couldn't stop reading it until I reached this ending. I literally burst in applause when Rarity sent Spike's fire with the flower in it, and then again when Twilight shows up to save Applejack,Rarity and Rainbow Dash from the world snake. They saved Twilight's life,she saved their's now they'e even!:D Kudos for the story,my friend though it isn't yours. Give my kudos to the real author. And thank you for giving me this time to read this wonderful story.

You should really submit this to Fimfiction, if you haven't already. I read it over on Equestria Daily and fell in love with it (seriously, you're amazing) and you'd get a lot more feedback there. Anywho, this story is still one of my all time favorites :)