THAT WAS THE DUMBEST STROY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE! you should be sent to jail for that piece of crap!

HEY KEEP GOING! I LIKE WHERE THIS IS GOING

Interesting, I liked it! :)

Thanks for dedicating it to me(and annyone else who reads it).

I loved this, but then I've always been one for angst. _ I would love to see a continuation of this or a longer version. Keep writing!

That was beautifully written. I really enjoyed it. Please do write more.

Great fic, but i really love your poem. I think that the first three lines are extremely well written and should be published some day. Angst is good, even more so when it's done well.