Beautiful and I left non-canon stories.

Great story.

Did they tell Charlie she was alive? Did the Volturi back off the remaining Cullens? So many unanswered questions. Loved it though. Great job!

Loved it!

Bella is pathetic and more in this fic. So quitting reading this, a loss of time!

Glad Jake saw reason, I was afraid he was going to do something stupid. Hopefully Alice didn’t see Edward dying, though I’m not so sure she’d say anything if she had. No mind readers around to discover the truth now, well, there’s Aro but as long as Carlisle never learns what happened I’m sure Aro will never find out either. Perhaps Edward killed himself finally, he did try before after all. ;)

I have a bad feeling Sam is wrong. Jake’s so obsessed that she should be his, who knows what he’ll do?

Wow. Edward is an ass, I can’t wait for him to die

He needs to mark her and soon. Neither guy is going to give up and they both need the reassurance that it won’t matter, it won’t change a thing. Because she’s already Paul’s

This isn’t going to go well at all but I agree with them, being with Jake is the wrong choice.

I wonder if Jake knows more about things than he’s let on, or if he really did just want her for her. Or at least the her he thought she was. And what about Edward? At Jake and Edward and Bella just pawns in some game? At least we know that Paul wants her for herself and nothing else. The question is, when the time comes, whose side will the pack and the other Cullens be on? Will they fight to keep her safe from whatever fate Carlisle and Billy are planning?

Everyone is so disappointed in Paul and I’m disappointed in them. Billy has no right to order Paul to do anything with Bella. Bella has a choice and she didn’t choose his son and he can fuck right off. As for Sam, it’s time he takes his head out of his ass and acts like alpha. The elders should never have been allowed to keep anything from them, absolutely nothing.

Sam is an idiot. If she wanted Jake she’d have chosen him, or gone to him to hide no matter how unsafe she felt it. When will any of them get that she isn’t a damn possession?! She makes her choices. She isn’t Edward’s, Jake’s, or even Paul’s. She’s hers

At least he’s willing to look into things and find answers, but will he hate the ones he gets?

Idk how being legally dead but still alive works, could she get married to someone else when she’s technically still legally married to Edward? And Jake and the others are going to hit the fan when they find out too, can Paul fight an alpha order? It’s clear she’s his mate, he just had to get passed some things and she did too in order to figure it out and find one another again but the obstacles that stand in their way.