I really loved this story, i will admit away from some of the errors in it it was such a great plot and story. Love to see someone so supportive of Willie and Ronie I was sad to see dear Eric go but i'm glad you didnt kill him off. I do wish you would have paired up Undertaker and Grell though becuase then i would have bowed at your feet XD great job!

Wow. Just... Wow.

I really enjoyed this story! It was quite lengthy and that's what I love reading. This was great! Beautiful detail, excelled story. A few things:

You might want to go back and proofread all your chapters. It sounds annoying, I know, but there are quite a lot of mistakes and typoes like the same words being repeated twice and the sentence gets messed up.

The cliffhangers at the end of the stories were rather weak. They just left off, leaving no suspense. Especially the last chapter. The ending feels... incomplete. I do see you have a sequel though.

Ronald seems a bit OOC at times, but that's probably just because he wasn't features a lot in the anime and he only recently got a rather good part in the manga... Well, just from what I read. Mainly good job overall!

I think that was my main concerns... Yeah. I enjoyed Michelle and the other OCs! The whole story you weaved was quite brilliant. And it was rather realistic as for how log they were in the hospital, etc.

I loved Eric and Alan! I haven't seen the musical, so this was my first taste of how they act. I also love the Eric/Ronald/Alan stuff.

Interesting how Ronald was afraid to say "I love you" at first... Something different is nice. That made it all more intriguing.

Grell was amazing in this story. Love him.

It makes me laugh how Ciel and Sebastian only appear very rarely and are only mentioned considering the actual series is centered about them and this story is about the soul reapers.

Absolutely incredible job. I thoroughly enjoyed this fic! You're a wonderful, creative writer. Keep that up! Thanks for writing!

This story is really well written. And the tension between William and Ronald is yummy!

Man, I've been reading this since Monday and I'm hardly half way through. Normally, I would have waited until the end to write a review, but I couldn't wait any longer. This has got to be my absolute favorite fanfiction ever. It has action, drama, William/Ronald, Eric/Alan, comedy, suspense, and everything else that I love in a story. Aside from the occasional grammar or spelling error, it's written beautifully and every sentence is worth reading. I am so happy that I stumbled upon this fanfiction, and I was very excited to find out that there's a sequel. What a beautiful piece of literature. Amazing job, dear. I look forward to reading more of your stories. :)

Oh my gosh. I want to cry so hard right now. DX Eric and Alan is the most heart breaking thing ever... and then all the stuff with Ronald.

See, I'm slowly reading it, but I am loving it so much.

Oh my gosh. I want to cry so hard right now. DX Eric and Alan is the most heart breaking thing ever... and then all the stuff with Ronald.

See, I'm slowly reading it, but I am loving it so much.

This... I started reading it because of everyone talking about it in the William x Ronald fc on the black butler forums. I wanted to be able to talk about it with you guys~

I have to say you have a brilliant mind. I

have not finished yet, but I can tell how creative you are. It is wonderful. The only thing is that I believe you would benefit and have triple the amount of reviews on your fics if you got a beta. I hope you don't think that is mean for me to say. It's just so lovely plot wise. ;.; I would love to beta for you if you are ever willing to go back and fix it up some. I really think it would be amazingly popular without the grammar mistakes. I hope this is helpful and not seen as mean.

I just started reading this work of yours today and I think it's fantastic and adorable so far (currently on chapter 6). It's incredible how you keep every character balanced and perfectly in-character and give them all fair amounts of screen time. A lot of writers tend to focus too much on one character while utterly neglecting or misrepresenting the others, but you make every character equally fascinating and that's not an easy feat. My personal favorite is Ronald though, so I especially love how you make him interact with his senior reapers. And I also appreciate that you convey senior/junior/boss relationships without relying on Japanese terminology like "san" or "senpai."

The plot promises to be engaging, and the whole thing is so wonderfully LONG :D I'll try to keep reviewing every so often as I read on.

Oh... the end... for now..

Although english is not my first language, I really loved this fic, as others said, you are a very good writer and the story and characters where greatly developed.

Let's hope Ronald beg more in the second part... I think I'm not the only wanting to see Alan joining them.

I wish you a Merry Christmas and an awesome new year to come.

"Still, Eric and Alan probably said forever once."

This, oh this 3

This is one of the most incredible fanfiction I've ever read. It's complex, very well written and you can make us want to know more and more at the end of every single chapter.

English isn't my main language, but I really enjoyed this and I'm expecting more fanfiction from you!

You're incredible!

Merry Christmas :)

I'm curious as to how things would go if they included Alan. Very nice~ he got Will this time in his own way. Looking forward to the squeal! Love it!

you didnt explain how alan forgave eric :(

pfft! Oh William...let the puppy have a chance on top!

I wanna know how Eric got out of it, too. I feel for Alan so much. ;n; I can't see him working with anyone besides Eric, it just sounds wrong. I wonder if they will be able to see each other again? Oh! I was looking forward to a lemon with Ronnie on the top. Please do! Love it!

The last part when Will and Grell were watching the office... That's sad.

I'd love Eric to come back to them 3

I'm expecting so much the sequel now :)