What the shit

Ahh. What a satisfying end.

There seems to be a sequel, though! I'll head on over immediately! :3

*insert lenny face here*

... Wait, what happened to Doug?

".. instead of a weird little robotic penis that dangled from the roof." OwO

So all in all, the bird saved the day. Never have I thought a bird would win against scientists and personnel with guns. And a lot of them to boot.

That beating was brutal. 0-0 Although I suppose the pain GLaDOS felt was worse.

Funniest chapter yet and mostly thanks to the end bit! XD Chubby Beak's back! :DD

That chant, though... XD

Why did you make Caroline a separate entity from GLaDOS?

What is with the tone in this chapter?! I'm actually asking, what were you going for here?

this was an amazing story thank you very much for writing it :)

FUCK YEAH get mad!

holy fuck that was hilarious
im so excited to see GLaDOS’s reaction to finally hear chell speak for the first time in a situatjon like that lmaooo

You know what. Not bad. It’s not smut even if some would call it that. It’s a nice read and you got a ton of stuff down to the point it really does feel like you properly portrayed the Portal/(and to an extent Half-Life) universe.

Overall, one of the better fanfics and well deserving of a high rating. It also gives me so ideas for my own stories and Portal inspired ideas.

“Instead of a weird little robotic penis that dangled from the roof.”

OH MY GOD I WILL NEVER GET THAT OUT OF MY HEAD. OH MY GOD WHY

“Damn, why don’t all these marriage proposals and offers for mistresses on the side happen in real life?”

Dunno mate, but uhhh, just remember, it IS real life, technically. There’re not AIs, unfortunately.