You did a great job with this. I am a huge suckered for fics where Chuck and Sarah meet pre-series and this was a good one.

You should really repick this up it was quite the read.
From: Spawn Hades

Great story. I like the mix of AU and canon. Well done. Maybe it can be continued someday?

Wow! That is really all I can say. Is just wow! I can't wait until your next update

ARE YOU GONNA CONTINUE WITH THIS FIC? ITS AWESOME. I WANNA READ MORE!

Nice AU! I hope you finish it someday! Thanks!

For a story that has been abandoned, it still managed to end fairoy neatly. Kudos to you for this fine story.

Perfect ending to this chapter.

Chuck is a naive fool - apparently nobody thought to train him in tactics.
And Casey is just unnecessarily a dick.

Cute, if rushed.

My beef was in the cafeteria (food pun not intended) - Chuck saves solo Sarah from bullies and leaves. Sarah wallows and suddenly Chuck reappears? Did he go grab his food and immediately come back? Did a chunk of time elapse before he felt guilty and came to sit with her? I would have enjoyed this more with a little more context given.

are you oanna continue to write this fic? its awesome!
i wanna know what happened next!

No! I can't believe you left it there! I love what you did, they have a great connection here, and I really like your idea that Bryce never even knew Jill had made him think they slept together. I need to know what happens to your Graham! More, please!

Hi, are you gonna continue this fic? im a huge fan! please, i wanna know what happened next!

This story is awesome! I hope you continue work on it soon :)

Wow! Ok so like this is my first time reading this story. N I just have to say it is AWESOME! I absolutely love it!

But I can see that is hasn't been updated in a while. I hope this fic hasn't been abandoned...

Please think about updating