Reviews for Manly
Guest chapter 1 . 6/18/2017
Really liked this.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/20/2014
Live it!
Vanessa Masters chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
LOOVE THIS! Want you to writ MOAR! :D
RenkonNairu chapter 1 . 11/23/2011
This was a very cute read and a couple lines had me covering my mouth with both hands to keep from laughing. A very amusing read.

The one complaint I have with this story, though, is actually general complaint I have with most non-cannon slash pairings. Its that when you are slashing two characters (within canon) are strait (or at least appear to be strait) there needs to be some sort of build-up or at least an explanation of why/how they're together now. Don't get me wrong, I like slash, but I'm also very picky about it. (I'm hard to please.)

This was an enjoyable one-shot and I urge you to keep writing.
P.Jay13 chapter 1 . 10/23/2011
Okay, this was totally amazing! You had me going "AWWWWWWWW" within the first several paragraphs;)

P.S. You're doing great at "Doctor Fake", no worries:)
NeverQuiteFinished chapter 1 . 10/20/2011
Yes, the waltermis was much overdone but I too noticed that Wally was the only one that cared. I loved this story and I was actually thinking of writing one myself so darn you for beating me to it lol but for real I loved it :)
Kiwisilence chapter 1 . 10/18/2011
This is is shorter than your usual one-shots, but who honestly cares about word count? In context of the episode and that this fulfills the severe lack of Kaldur/Wally fanfiction, it's great (you're also a great writer, but that goes without saying).

Kaldur is kept in-character, but you've also added fun little implications to speech. "...most persuasively?" how can Wally resist the ever-manuevring tongue of Kaldur's in his mouth?

"Maybe because if Kent Nelson wasn't in there anymore, we would have to rely on Rob as our leader": this line makes me wonder if there is reason for Kid Flash to not want Robin as leader despite their close friendship.

"DUDE! I'm pretty sure you picking me up bridal style drops my manly points by at least one million!": oh Wally, I knew there was a reason you were my favorite Young Justice character. Good one-liner :)

"I believe that your so called 'manly points' are going to drop even further at the activity I have in mind": does this refer to Wally in a fetal position or am I reading too much into this to think it comments on that some gay men view bottoming as emasculating? (personally I don't agree with that viewpoint, but I'm wondering if Kaldur likes joke/tease Wally about it).

As always, thanks for writing another one-shot. They are always fun to read/review. The Waltermis in that episode was thick enough to choke on - why can't the show at least subtly hint at or joke about slash?