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This story was absolutely incredible wow

loved it

This was awesome! I really liked this. Loved Miss Raven.

This is very good! Loved this!

Wow. I think paying for membership fee even just for watching the public punishments and rewards are worth it in this club. XD

I suppose Harry won't be the only voyuer then. XD

The nature of Severus and Vivienne's bonding activity is kind of funny. XD

And here I thought it was Severus who waylaid Vivienne into the path of pain and pleasure. Guess I was wrong. At first I thought I wanted Severus to be Bi, just so he and Vivienne can have a bit of fun, but I suppose sharing is nice too. XD

I do wish Severus had more history in this though.. But I suppose it just goes to show that the man has natural talent for a Dom. He hardly needed training. XD

With Vivienne's assertion to Severus as her Head of House.. It kinda of made me wonder how many more were there. I'm rather sure Slytherins are drawn into authority, like moths to a flame. If they aren't the flame that is. XD

I'm unsure if it's a good sign for a Dom to show uncertainty with people's trust. Maybe it's the powerplay. I think I understand it with Vivienne and Severus since they don't have a Dom/Sub relationship. But I don't think it's a good sign if Severus shows his awe, that Harry, his Sub would trust him. I'm just going ahead and will blame it as a dream, thus inaccurate. XD

Charlie asked Harry what 'his' name was. It's kind of mean but.. well, Charlie already knew. In fact, it's the very same name that made him leave Harry. XD

Love how Hermione is still his sister. Chin up. That simple advise warmed my heart. Kind of weird to have family friendly thoughts in this fic though. XD

Anyway, where is security? How did the Weasleys get in? Tsk, tsk. Breech of protocol is what it is. I'm actually outraged for the members. I think an Obliviate is in order. Can't keep a club if the members aren't safe you know. XD

Sev- err, Harry's Master has quite a collection of tattoos, not just teeny tiny ones too. Rather massive ones in fact.. One doesn't just ink them on in a snap. The man mentioned Vivienne using glamours, would it be right to assume that Sev- er, 'he' used glamours as well during his tenure in Hogwarts to keep them? XD

I think it would be a bit of a fitting rebellion on his part to ink himself in such a way that Voldemort's Mark would have been seen as insignificant compared to the ones he chose for himself.

Greyback had no chance against a Switch in Dom mode. XD

I wonder though, who trained who, who's the chicken and who' the egg between Vivienne and Severus? XD

Looks like Harry's voyeurism turned on him, with Vivienne and Draco watching him in action instead. xD

This looks to be a to die for read. xD

I'm a couple of chapters in. So it happens that having to serve two masters without even the tiniest amount of fulfillment finally got to Severus after all. He's got his own rules now.

The master with slaves that fall all over him.. panting for more than just Crucios. Now I kind of wished Bellatrix was alive.. They'd have been great partners on this business endeavor. XD

Though the public humiliation/exabition scenes made me cringe (because of my hard limit regarding it not because of your writing) it is a very sweet story. Very well thought out with a clear plot.

I love this story. I love the fact that Severus and Harry finally got together at the end of the story. I loved every one of the sex scenes. They were extremely hot.

Wow. I really like this spoiler. I hope that you write the story soon.