this is a gem of a fic that definitely doesn't have the reviews it deserves! wonderful story! I keep hoping for a sequel

love this story! lol sea of trees. i would have loved to see them investigate aokigahara in the manga/anime!

I liked it. A couple mistakes here and there but overall really good. Nice work.

Lolol! I really enjoyed reading this, but I don't see why it's rated M. Awesome tale you've spun here!

HAHAHAH!

What a...strange...yet intriguing...well written story! It feels like InuYasha meets Ghost Hunt lol! But good job!

that, was, mean! stupid Naru. however the story was really intersting, funny and kawaii.

MAIxNARU forever!

keep it on!

;-)

That was an evil thing for Naru and Lin to do, and a nice ending to the story.

I really enjoyed this story a lot. I hope you write another in the Ghost Hunt universe.

I really liked how Mai's need to protect Naru overcame the charms and how Naru's use of the charm helped defeat Karasu. The battle was very well done, but my favorite part was the end where Jingoro called her by her name.

There were so many good moments in this chapter. Your description of Mai and her tails was very well done and the way you are moving on the story is great. It just flows in an entertaining way.

I really like how you started this. The chapter's ending was particularly good. I think Naru may smile a bit more in this than his character would in the anime/manga but it doesn't detract from the story.

I loved it :) a very entertaining story.

I love the little joke at the end :p lol 78 million yen? poor Mai!

keep up the good work :)

That...was a brilliant story. Different and short, but still wonderfully written. Well done. ;)

I didn't think Id like it at first but I liked it more and more as i read. It was rally different and I really liked it. The descriptions were awesome. I enjoyed it alot:) Thanks Kepp up the good stories:)