GAH. I can't even. Wow. This was a very creative way of spinning a story though it did take me a while before I realized it was all connected (until the storm comment). The cliches were adorable and I just love the ending. Great job!

so what's your opinion, I would suggest to continue or stop?

What then, what is your point of view, you like those cliches?

Awww! That was very cleverly written!

This was just too cute for words, love this piece !

Oh that's adorable! Nice work Spinxtamer. D

I LOVE THIS STORY.

Seriously, it's just...gah. It's wonderful. I adore it. Thank you for writing this and making my day. C:

OMG THIS WAS ADORABLE. It will be favorited!

Now this was a really unique idea for a story and it was beautifully written out!

And now everyone will know not to mess with the almighty being that is Fanfiction. Its a force to be reckoned with and not even the powerful Arthur can stop it!

This is too much cute for one story. I love Ariadne just being a;; 'I told you so'.

This was absolutely enjoyable.

Very original. Immediate favourite. This was more than a little gorgeous. Thank you for posting it. Although picking a favourite line is hard, I think I'll settle for: "Maybe there really was something to be said for that FanFiction nonsense."