You misspelled convenience every single time, and instead used connivance (meaning collusion). as for the rest, I just read through the spelling mistakes. I'm math... not English, myself, so no worries. thanks for the story. I enjoyed the jade elephant.

the order of chapters 5-7 are very confusing

Tater Tot Tuesday, amazing

it was a very good read but I still stand by my last comment.

I think she's stupid for forgiving Harry. and I think she should report Dumbledore for knowing and doing nothing.

I liked the story, truly despised Dumbledore and how he treated Hermione.

It's cute how Draco wars with owls. :)) :3

Please tell me they get married. I need more of this. You're a fantastic writer

Well Draco is going to be an intriguing addition. Great chapter!

This is such an interesting idea. Great chapter!

I felt like I was reading a parody, and I'm greatly amused. I'm not sure if you're going for that angle though. To me, the absurdity of all events and its parallelisms to the real thing had me thinking if you actually wrote this to poke fun or criticize the original. How, for example, Dumbledore was very secretive and manipulative, and how Harry failed to learn Occlumency properly. It's much more beautiful and meaningful for me when I realized that.

I liked that Draco became Draco Black, and that he has a loyal troop of Hufflepuff firsties! So cute

This is a brilliant story that I've loved reading.

AHhh! This was amazing! Super cute! Fantastic job!

Hi I love this story and I'd just like to point out that chapter 5 and 6 seem to be switched, just so you know :)