Sweet! I would have liked to read a bit more of their development after their first swimming lesson... ;)

LOVE this couple :D

This was definitely cute. Nice job

This. Was. So. Hot.
I absolutely love Artemis/Kaldur and it's so rare to find a fic about them (this being the 2nd one I've ever read). You kept them in character and you wrote it so well so I'm definately faving!

HOT. nuff said. plz write more like this about artemis and kaldur

aww! that was so cute! so freaking cute i want to have its babies!

this is completely and utterly perfect! fabfabfab!

Quite hot and really enjoyable read!

Very in character, and I love the bit about Kaldur's tattoos. The descriptions were very colorful - I rather like the picture they painted. The pairing is one I like - though, I'm kind of in that open minded state where nearly every YJ pairing is one I like - but these two are definitely interesting. It's also nice for Aqualad to get some attention. Good work.

~Shadoki

Why isn't there more chapters for this? Please add more chapters, I love this. Mmmm...Kaldur...

A good, in character Aqualad/Artemis story, that's all I was looking for. Thank you so much for providing, it especially since Artemis is such a sensual character in the first place this is absolutely perfect... I'm rambling a bit but I'm just so excited. I always thought they would look good together but ever since the "I feel naked, and not in the fun way"/"We'll make our own fun", I knew it was meant to be. ;)

I will cop to finding both Kaldur and Artemis pretty damn attractive, and this just helped further that. The fact that you kept them both perfectly in character only makes it sexier; it felt very believable. Thanks for this. :)

Ooooooooh. Yesyesyesyes. :DD I've been hoping to read something good with Artemis/Kaldur. I like the thought of the tattoos being, like, -almost- taboo to touch because of sensitivity.

Oh my goodness. My gods. My capital-G-God.

Someone is writing Arteldur. Someone is writing REALLY FREAKING GREAT Arteldur. Those types of stories are rarer than a crocodile in the Murray River.

Dude, this is AWESOME! Please write more, 'cuz this is going in my favourites section.

hello, this is angie, and this is perfect. like you can write me things anytime you want dear. this is exactly what i wanted and more.

(i especially love the part about her "fighting off a slight phobia of dying a slow, watery death", that was just too funny.