I have cat suggestion: Claw,male, he's a loner, aged 8 moons, personality: doesn't trust anyone

Yay! Read on phone. Couldn't review. Hope you update soon!

Please update soon, where did you get this idea from, and I'M CRAVING MORE OF THIS STORY AND WALKERS- !
By the way, a walker attacked me and I got bit- Rrrrrrrrrr

Hi there! My name is Ember, and I've been reading for a while now. I know we are no longer allowed to submit characters, but if there is any room, you could always tell me.

I think that Spottedfur should die in the end. It wouldn't be as an interesting story if everyone lived happily ever after.

Also, I really like your story, and I have an important question.

I deicided on writing a story myself. I was sitting at my laptop when I thought.

"What if Redcough had spread to other territories?"

I am still writing my story, but wondering if I could post it somewhere if I gave you credit. I also named the main character Stormleaf, after you.

Please get the next chapter up soon! I wanna know what's gonna happen to Wolfpaw and if the Walkers will escape. And if Dawnkit will ever be found XD.

I hate Whitestar, she needs to be eaten alive by the Walkers! When I read that a Walker attacked her, I was like 'Yay!' But then Thornstar saved her and I was like 'Aww man...' XD. There were still a few grammatical errors, but nothing major. Keep writing please!

Oh no, Sandfur got bitten DX! And Dawnkit vanished DX! I'm loving the suspense in this story so far! But I noticed a mistake at the beginning of this chapter - Sandfur mentioned Quailpaw, but she didn't even meet her because Quailpaw appeared in the story AFTER Sandfur, Robinfeather and Dawnkit were captured by Slash. There are also a few grammar and spelling mistakes. But other than that, your writing is very good ).

Ooh, what a suspenseful cliffhanger at the end! I actually thought this chapter was pretty good, even if it was rushed. And Featherheart finally had her kits! Too bad they had to be born in the middle of a Walker onslaught though XD.

Ha, Quailpaw is so peppy and cute XD! I would've liked to suggest a cat or two for this story, but since it's been around for a while I'm not sure if you need any more suggestions lol.

There was just one thing that confused me about this chapter - what is MarshClan? Did you mean SwampClan, where Robinfeather and the others came from? Other than that, this and the last chapter were both good and I will continue to read and review this story ).

I just came across this story and I have to say that it's a really great idea, I LOVE it! But I'd like to offer just the TEENSIEST bit of constructive criticism and say that it would be good for you to expand a bit on your descriptions (just in case you haven't started to do so in later chapters). For example, you could explain a bit more about 'Redcough', what caused it and how it transformed the cats into Walkers. Also, a bit of background information about the characters, particularly the main ones like Spottedfur, would be great too, as it seems like they were just there randomly P. By the way, I don't mean to offend you with these suggestions, I just think they will help make your story more gripping XD. But I really do like this story and the idea behind it, even though I've only just got past the first chapter, and I hope you continue with it and keep my suggestions in mind ).

Are you going to continue? I feel the need to write about zombie cats XD its such a good idea. Do you think i can write a story like this one if i ad a disclaimer giving you all the credit?

Againg ran out of room but anyway thats how they should meet and i repeat DO NOT MAKE ANY OF THEM DIE PLEASE

Sorry i ran out of room but anyway:before anyone made a move the six shadows jumped out of the bushes and attacked the 6 walker that were cournering danwkit. the golden tom with big ears jumped on the biggest walker ahd clawed out one of its eye while the four kits started to claw and bite a walker till it fell on the ground. watch out jaguarheart! cried the white she cat with black stripes but the golden tom was already attacking it and the last walker was eating one of the dead walkers while the kits started to attack it. when all of them were dead dawnkit ran to rainpelt while spottedfur askedwho are you guys?.i am jaguarheart the golden tom with black spots said. and this is my mate zebrastripe and our kits yewkit,lionesskit,gingerkit, and harrykit said jaguarheart pointing t with his tail to four kits and a white she cat with black stripes. and we are tryinng to stop walkers from killing all of the clans and we come from a forest not to far from here said zebrastripe. and thats how i think they shoul

I have a idea for some cats:jaguarheart gender: tom description:golden with black spots and big ears and long claws mate:zebrastripe gender:she cat descrption:white with black stripes and is really fast kits:yewkit,gingerkit,lionesskit, and harrykit descrption: yewkit:white she kit with red muzzle red foot and red ears like a yew berry lionesskit:golden she kit with big ears and long tail gingerkit:ginger tom with white belly and feet and white tip on tail harrykit:long haired white kit with black paws muzzle ears and tail (alot like blackstarAND DONT MAKE ANY OF THEM DIE PLEASE BUT MAKE GINGERKIT AND YEWKIT ALMOST KILLED BY WALKERS i will explain in a minute)/ow they meet them in the story:they make there way off the mountain when a cry is heard and they all bolt and see dawnkit counered by six ! rainpelt yelled. she bolts to him we four shadows about the size of kits is seen and two adult cat shadows appear running after the kits. TWO WALKERS ARE CHASING FOUR KITS! cried rainpelt.