well you have me rethinking my previous comment. much better details. I hope you come back to finish the story. Bella's just getting interesting! you have a devious imagination. I will follow this and hope you come back to it. if you do please think about a outtake about what went on between Jasper and Charlie, and how he became interested in Bella.

I know you told us these would be shorter and un beta'd chapters but it now feels rushed, lacking the details that made the story hold my interest in the beginning. I still like the story it just seems like at this point your over it.

between this J/B version and the EB versions I would have like to have seen a chapter or outtake about E/J when they first see Bella what attracted them to her and what exactly went on in the time before she was taken home to become a Cullen wife. What went on between the Cullens and Charlie, did E/J spy on Bella aside from the casual bump ins or lunches etc... I'd be super excited if you added that background to both YOUR A CULLEN NOW stories.

this is definitely darker than the original story, so far.

update soon

How does it end?

You should finish this

Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter

Please return to this story again. It is too good to abandon. Hope to hear soon from you

Please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with bella and jasper

When will you post more chapters?

This book is amazing please continue to write it.

fuck you for not finishing this

can you please please update if possible this it's gotten so good I can put it down .

Please add more chapters to this book would love to see what happens with Bella and Jasper