Fabulous. I love Arthur's internal argument. It's well writtten.

Wonderful. This would be great as a mult-chapter story. I want to see Arthur interacting with Hunith.

Fabulous.

3 y rnt u continuing?! I love this!

So good! I love it! You need to write a sequel, though! I want to know what happens next! :)

I love it! I'm totally on board with the idea of you continuing the story instead of leaving it as a one-shot. Maybe continue with their journey to Ealdor and the shenanigans that ensue?

please UD soon :D x

Okay, so I reread the bit and replaced his line with "I'll go OUT with you"... It totally threw my mind in the gutter, and the whole entire story lost its meaning and the very last big paragraph nearly gave me a scarring.

But I cleansed it with the true line, and AWWW!

"Frservant?" What's that, Arthur? A new word for Merly? ;)

It'd work well as a oneshot, considering I am admittedly more looking forward to the other awesomeness you have planned. BUT because I refuse to be practical and say you do not have superhuman writing powers (...*muses* Despite like three stories and a you-know-what lately...) you can write all of 'em! :D I have the saddest death scene of Merly's mommy dying and gooey bromance... I know, I'm cruel. *revives her* STILL BROMANCE!

So, yeah. Continue? If you can? Just don't fail anything. *nods wisely*

Ba-da-bum-ba-baaa, I'm lovin' it! (Okay, I'm hungry...)

-Dodo

Great beginning! I am looking forward to seeing where you go with this story!

love it, so cute! ...but why is gaius pissing you off?

Aw, this was so sweet! :)

I hope Hunith does make an appearance in season 4. I miss her. And I'm sure Merlin does. And hey, maybe even Arthur does, too. ;D

Anyways, nice fic! _