Love it love it! Oh I wish that there could have been a season 3... Maybe Henry is still out there trying to persuade someone!

(I have an acount... somewhere on this site)

I really enjoyed your story.. sort of a ...what happens when we close the book type of thing. Quite fun

I only have one thing (and it's not even that big). You got Henry just right - except when he says "you could have made a happy ending with a flick of your fucking wand, you're just too much of a nob to care."
you see 'nob' is a- never mind. I read it as noob... I just made a right tit of myself. I no longer have any issue with your story at all.

Totally pissed that they aren't continuing the series.
I get mad when they don't even have a proper ending for a series. They could've at least done something like a 2-parter to finish it off with. Instead they just leave it hanging & us to wonder what might've been, like so many other good shows I love. Sigh.
Love the bit BTW when Henry asks, "Who's Claudia?" LOL!

I was quite depressed when Spirited ended there... I AGREE! TO FOXTEL! :)

~Melodia F.

I so want to believe this is true! It seems like it should be. Like it's currently happening in the Foxtel offices. You captured Henry perfectly. I could feel his heartache and despair and you nearly had me crying even in this short amount of prose. Great job. This should be posted on the SOS petition just so the bigwigs know what to expect next time they rock up to work.

HOMG. HOMG. Can't even...the ending! And the swearing, so perfectly timed, and the characterisation and the sheer absurdity of this! 3. It is amazing. :)

I'm glad, if writing this made you feel better, READING it definately made me feel better!

This is just so perfectly Henry! Oh if it would only happen this way!

love it love it love it